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Watched: A Sinfully Erotic Short Story

Narrated by: Jack Calihan
Length: 19 mins
Categories: Erotica, Fiction
3.5 out of 5 stars (8 ratings)

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Summary

Tonight was like any other work night, making his security guard rounds until Jose came across a couple making out in their car. He watched until the hot blonde and her boyfriend walked back to her condo, and to his surprise, they continued their session on the balcony. Should Jose stay in the shadows and watch? Just how far will the couple go?

©2017 Lexi Lovelock (P)2018 Lexi Lovelock

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short and Hot

Wow who would have thought that you could be left hot and bothered in less than 20min.

Narration was good, although the female voice needs more practice

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CREEPER...

"Watched: A Sinful Exotic Short Story" written by Lexi Lovelock was truly in effect to ones' body and mind in under a minute clip. I know it managed to affect me fast and quickly, before I knew what hit me.
I began to feel uneased with his stalker-like motions as the story continues. And, knowing he was the security officer for the apartment complex, made me more uncomfortable.

I was really thrilled to learn that Jack Calihan was casted the narrator. I have enjoyed him in many other book that he was the narrator. He gives 150% of himself into the characters that are in the book and you can tell that he enjoys his work.
I do recommend "Watched" to others, just keep a close eye on your windows; especially at night, during your intimate moments.

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Erotic Short Story

Watched by Lexi Lovelock is a sinfully erotic short story that I listened to on audio narrated by Jack Calihan.

This is the first book of Lexi’s that I have listened to and I look forward to trying more of her work in the future. The storyline is from a spectator’s point of view. The story is only 13 pages or 19 Minutes on audio so it gets to the sexual scene quite quickly.

Jack did an amazing job with the narration. I really enjoy his deep voice. I found it perfect for Jose the security guard. I look forward to listening to more of his work in the future.

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This was a great steam filled short. Shorts are great for one fun packed scene. This one has some heat filled voyerism to warm you on a rainy night.

Narration was great- I can't get enough of Jack's voice. So deep and tempting. Great job!

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Short Erotic story!

The narrator has a wonderfully sexy and a very pleasant cadence to his voice. The story was not what I expected. the story is more of a peeping tom type story. It wasn't bad just no back story, just mainly sex. i prefer more of an actual storyline.

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fast & erotic

if voyerism is you thing this very short story, of a guy doing his job who finds plenty of scenes for his viewing pleasure, will be right up your street

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Off the charts hot!

Wow this may be a very short audiobook but holy cow is it hot!! This is down and dirty. Loved it. I definitely want more from this author. Jack has a wonderful voice.

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Disappointing story, good narrator

Watched is an explicit short story by Lexi Lovelock.

When writing erotica it can be tricky to create a scene that has broad appeal, because everyone's tastes are different.

For me, this book was a turn off. I prefer erotica to feel *erotic*, but this had none of the sensuality or finesse that would have made it so much sexier. The biggest issue was the writing. So many phrases were repetitive, word choices were often jarring, cliched, or ridiculous, and every syllable of the dialogue from the woman could have been lifted from a sleazy adult film.

As a woman, I just didn't find it realistic, and as a reader it wasn't compelling. How the voyeuristic security guard could determine the intimate grooming regimen of 'the blonde woman's boyfriend' from such a distance away I've no idea, but it was just one of the unfortunate moments that really jerked me out of the story.

It felt like a fantasy written by a man, and not just because the 'male gaze' in the story has a masculine POV. It was tacky, with very little engaging characterisation. A paltry attempt was made to set the couple up as being lovingly infatuated with each other, but it wasn't backed up by their interactions.

When writing a short story you really have to take care to ensure it is exquisitely crafted because there's so little to judge it upon that everything has to work and the writing needs to be on point. I was hoping this short story would be 'sinfully erotic' and a brief but wild ride, but it was disappointing.

The only saving grace was the narrator, whose deep, rich voice was perfect for this genre of story. I would definitely listen to other books narrated by Jack Calihan, though I wouldn't listen to other books by Lexi Lovelock unless they were also free.

I'd recommend this book if you are looking for a quick, cheap, gritty thrill and aren't fussed about the writing. It could be useful for someone with a visual impairment, for example, who is looking for something equivalent to audio-described X-rated films.


*I received this book free of charge in exchange for an honest, unbiased review.

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  • Mandymay💄👠👛
  • 02-11-18

This book dives right into the sexy parts.

A voyeuristic security guard takes an inside look into couple's intimate time.
If you're looking for instant heat? This is your book. Between the writing and the narration, this book felt so sinful I felt like l was the voyeur. I was given a free copy of this book at my request and have voluntarily decided to leave this review.

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  • TALIA
  • 29-03-20

Good story

This is a quick dirty little read. The storyline was believable and it was well written. The narrator did a good job and he has a deep sexy voice. Just perfect for reading naughty books. I recieved this book for free in exchange for a honest review.

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  • ronigirl
  • 30-11-19

The 🔥 est Nineteen Minutes I've Experienced 🔥

If you could ever think that an audiobook could be so erotic in just under 20 minutes, this is that short story. Lexi Lovelock brought it to you and I mean she loaded and shot it on the target & I was hot.
I mentally questions what is she going to do with such a limited amount of time but I will never question what this particular authur can do with limited time again. I enjoyed "Watched" very immensely, I have to admit & I felt my forehead get a little perspiration and maybe some other things got a little excited, this one really did it for me.

And, the narrator Jack Calihan, boy I have listened to other things he has narrated and they had been moving slightly; more on the love romantic level, but this took to a whole new erotic level. Jack knows how to work under any genre that you throw at him and he knows how to work with it very well.

So, I do give this short story my two thumbs up and 5-🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟's recommendation.

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  • sandymill
  • 19-11-19

a short erotic story

This story is also in book form. The narrator did a great job with the story. He brought the story to life for me. I enjoyed this short erotic story. Jose is a security guard that is making his rounds. When he see a couple in a car making out session. When they decided to leave the car and move to a condo and out onto a balcony. The couple doesn't see Jose is watching them in the shadows.

I was given a complimentary copy from the author. This is my honest unbiased opinion.

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  • 🎧Mandy🎧 Sawyer 🎧Audiobook 🎧Obsession🎧 Reviewer🎧
  • 19-10-19

Down and dirty

Wow this may be a very short audiobook but holy cow is it hot!! This is down and dirty. Loved it. I definitely want more from this author. Jack has a wonderful voice.
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  • Tjhill
  • 22-09-19

Wow 🔥🔥

This definitely gets straight to it immediately. Jose enjoys the show and they enjoy putting on the show. The narrator does a great job.
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  • Kylie
  • 08-06-19

voyeuristic fun

You get to go through this short kinkster through the eyes of a voyeur.

The narrator is great. The story is to the point.

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  • Chopsticks11
  • 07-06-19

Short and to the Point

I love the narrator and while it’s a bit concerning to think of someone watching you get the impression that these folks knew and it excited them more. I also liked that they are obviously a loving couple.


I was provided with a free copy of this audiobook for my honest review. The views expressed here are entirely my own.

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  • Leticia Crow
  • 04-11-19

very erotic!

I'm not sure what was hotter the guy watching or the couple! All I know is that was one erotic short story! definitely recommended for those adults who like to get their blood boiling!

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  • SMM
  • 18-10-19

Like it alot

Usually I dont like short stories but I am beginning to love them. Especially when narrated by Jack Calihan!