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Not Perfect

A Novel
Narrated by: Amy McFadden
Length: 10 hrs and 38 mins
3.5 out of 5 stars (6 ratings)

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Summary

From Elizabeth LaBan, the acclaimed author of The Restaurant Critic's Wife, comes a captivating and very funny novel about a wife and mother's fall from grace, and why keeping up appearances is not her biggest secret.

Tabitha Brewer wakes up one morning to find her husband gone, leaving her no way to support herself and their two children, never mind their upscale Philadelphia lifestyle. She'd confess her situation to her friends - if it wasn't for those dreadful words of warning in his goodbye note: "I'll tell them what you did."

Instead, she does her best to keep up appearances, even as months pass and she can barely put food on the table - much less replace a light bulb. While she looks for a job, she lives in fear that someone will see her stuffing toilet paper into her handbag or pinching basil from a neighbor's window box.

Soon, blindsided by catastrophe, surprised by romance, and stunned by the kindness of a stranger, Tabitha realizes she can't keep her secrets forever. Sooner or later, someone is bound to figure out that her life is far from perfect.

©2018 Elizabeth LaBan (P)2018 Brilliance Publishing, Inc., all rights reserved

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Couldn't listen - voice too annoying

What could have made this a 4 or 5-star listening experience for you?

Really looking forward to this book. However, the voice was so annoying I gave up on it. Waste of a credit!

Has Not Perfect put you off other books in this genre?

No but will check narrator next time

How did the narrator detract from the book?

couldn't concentrate on the story because found the narrators voice distracting

What reaction did this book spark in you? Anger, sadness, disappointment?

disappointment

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  • Tara H.
  • 10-03-18

Solid 4 stars

For the most part, the narration was good. The narrator has an obnoxious habit of lilting upwards ever so slightly on the last word of every sentence. But you get used to it. Kind of.

The story was great if you are expecting a story about a woman in a hard situation. If you're expecting a romance, you'll feel a tiny bit disappointed. Not super disappointed, by any means. Just a bit.

It's not steamy (which I appreciated), so no worries if you prefer to avoid sex scenes. But even in the scenes meant to be between the MC and the new love interest, the underlying focus was on the crappy (ex)husband. I wanted a bit more of THEM without the constant shadow of the ex.

That said, I still enjoyed this. Never felt like a waste of time. I cared enough to rewind if at times I felt like I didn't quite listen well enough. solid 4 stars.

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  • ADHC
  • 26-04-19

I absolutely loved this book!

It was mysterious, exciting, heart-wrenching at times, and heartwarming as well. I earned a couple of marathon badges from Audible because I just couldn't stop listening. It's one that you're almost sad when it's over. I highly recommend.

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  • Therese Van Arsdale
  • 22-10-18

Desperation

Good story. Able narration. Worth a go. Captures Center City Philadelphia well. Lovely dash of humour.

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  • Ellen Zelda
  • 04-07-18

Boring and pointless.

This book is really bad on so many levels.

The main character, Tabitha, is totally impotent in taking control of her life in the face of adversity. She'd rather be a victim than take control of any circumstance and, for this reason, she made me angry - throughout. I have to wonder if the author is trying to make a statement - and, if so, what is it? Possibly she's saying that typical non-working, semi-privileged mothers have no productive coping or survival skills?

We learn from the beginning that Tabitha is just one of those sorry victims of life. She just lets life happen to her after her husband walks out on her and her kids. She drifts from one meal to the next (literally). Worst, she lets her kids down in about a dozen ways.

Further, the author presents the two children (ages 9 and 13) in a really poor light (this one is hard to explain). Even the kids' names are odd. Tabitha constantly uses babyish nicknames - like "Fernie Bernie" and "Monkey" - for them, and you have to wonder: who does this?

The motivation of the husband/father who walks out is thin and unrealistic. And so it goes.

As for the narrator, Amy McFadden, she is one of my favorites. But she was either totally wrong for this book - or she was so great that she skillfully conveyed the uselessness of the main character. In any event, she was totally annoying.

So I do wonder: why did I finish this book that left me with such an overwhelmingly negative feeling? If you read it, maybe you can answer this question in your comments. I'll watch.

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  • Sekai
  • 27-10-19

Some slow parts

This book was pretty 👌. The main lady character irritated me a bit with her over analyzing everything. She should have get enjoyed her small sweet moments. Her husband was darn piece of crap.

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  • Anonymous User
  • 22-05-19

just dont

ok first off I know this is fiction but however let's go through the plethora of issues within this book.
1) not getting proper nutrition and food for your kids because of what your friends may think if your jerk of a husband left you penniless is ignorant and beyond belief .

2) not seeking medical attention. for a child ...is child endangerment.

3) please tell me there are not women out here in this day and age that are this spineless .
if anyone relates to the way this Tabitha is please seek counsel and advice .
if I could have given this book a negative I so would have .
I spent 8 plus hours from start to finish screaming you've got to be kidding me !!!!!

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  • PeterPie
  • 30-10-18

Dreary inner monologue

I’m sorry to say that this book wasn’t for me. I read for enjoyment and this wasn’t. The audio performance was okay. However the lead character was too timid and fearful to be enjoyable. Move on.

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 06-10-18

Hmmmm

Not what I was expecting. Far too overly detailed and way too long. The main character made up most of her issues in her mind. Very anticlimactic.

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  • Tamarsha
  • 13-09-18

Blah

The story needed more work. The timing in which certain details were revealed was truly frustrating. The main character knew why her husband left, but it wasn't truly revealed until later in the book, financial situations didn't add up either until the middle of the story. It just seemed as if the storyline wasn't completely thought out.

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  • Kindle Customer
  • 01-08-18

Great narration

Would have given it 5 stars but I was no aggravated with the behavior of the adult characters. They all are in need of some therapy. And what they did to those poor kids.

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