Cute Erotic Short Story

I received this audiobook free for an honest review. This audiobook was very light hearted, funny, cute, erotic and quick. Although this was a very short story, the point of the story was detailed enough to give you an understanding of the characters. The narrator did a great job of distinguishing between the characters. Nicholas and Michael, twins, are described as typical, young men, that appear to have lead sheltered lives. However, Daisy knows exactly what they need. You can pretty much know what happens next. I enjoyed this short story and will look for more from Cynthia Mendoza to fill in between my big books.

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Book was just okay

BOOK REVIEW.......
This story was just okay. Nothing really wows me about it.

NARRATOR REVIEW.......
Narrator did a good job

“This audiobook was given by the author, narrator, or publisher at no cost in exchange for an unbiased review via Audiobook Boom.”

L.

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4 Dragon Star’s

I loved this book, I have listened to a lot of short stories and I always feel like not enough detail goes in. Just because its short doesn't mean it needs to be incomplete.

This book has it all, the story, the plot, and the detail.

Nicolas & Michael are brothers who just lost their father. They learn who they are and what needs to be done to keep their bloodline going.

Daisy just happens to be what they need and don’t know it yet. I love it did I say that already. Well I did and I enjoyed the narration as well.
Great fun fast listen.

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Could have been better

I don't know if it's the woman reading or not, But to hear her try to voice they brothers, it's very disconcerting. Book could have been better over all, should have more info about book,

First draft?

The story seems unfinished and more like a first draft for the book... so many unanswered questions and everything feels rushed. Why did the father keep it a secret? What story’s did the grandmother tell? (Just to mention a few) I don’t mind short books, but this was written in a way that needed more.... Could have been a great book... Melissa Barr did a great job narrating the book, I will definitely look for more of her work!

Short, but sweet 'n sexy

This is a sexy menage short but sweet bedtime story. It is fluently written without awkward hangups - could have been fleshed out a bit more.

not long enough

would have been great if the story was longer. the book is too short and not enough details.

Quickie story

The narrator did a good job. Hopefully she has done a few more that are longer.
This is a very short book, only 8 short chapters. It is alright for a quickie read.
There isn't much substance other than twin 24 year old men discover they are dragons after their father dies. They also find out they must find and mate with the same woman in order to conceive a child to carry on their family line.

Would’ve been great if it was about two hours long

That’s a good storyline but nothing got developed it was over to fast I think you it was a well developed timeline as well

I Need More

This is a good story but I needed more. There is so much substance to this story that it shouldn't be a short story.