Try an audiobook on us

The Anime Trope System: Stone vs. Viper, Book 1

A LitRPG (ATS)
Narrated by: David Reimer
Length: 6 hrs and 47 mins
5 out of 5 stars (4 ratings)
Regular price: £18.29
£7.99/month after 30 days. Cancel anytime

Summary

At the mercy of an unknown entity, Clyde gets tossed into the anime world. Yes, it exists, we just don't know it. There, he's declared the Stone, the anime main character. One day, he must kill the Viper, or else it's good-bye, Earth. 

This is the comedic tale of a young man vs. cliche anime tropes. Yep, there's nothing like random anime girls falling in love with you...over anything, crazy yanderes, or that girl with the absurd charisma. But hey, at least he's able to level up, just like the RPGs. 

Will he find the true purpose of this cruel game, or will the anime tropes consume him? 

A lover of character development...  

Warning: This audiobook contains sexual content, scenes, and sexual humor fit for anime fans (and ramps up a lot after chapter seven). You have been warned.

©2018 Alvin Atwater (P)2018 Alvin Atwater

What members say

Average customer ratings

Overall

  • 5 out of 5 stars
  • 5 Stars
    3
  • 4 Stars
    1
  • 3 Stars
    0
  • 2 Stars
    0
  • 1 Stars
    0

Performance

  • 5 out of 5 stars
  • 5 Stars
    3
  • 4 Stars
    1
  • 3 Stars
    0
  • 2 Stars
    0
  • 1 Stars
    0

Story

  • 4.5 out of 5 stars
  • 5 Stars
    2
  • 4 Stars
    2
  • 3 Stars
    0
  • 2 Stars
    0
  • 1 Stars
    0
No Reviews are Available
Sort by:
  • Overall
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    5 out of 5 stars
  • john moglia
  • 23-01-19

need a score card

i needed a flow chart or score card to keep track of all the girls in this book. i wish that the personality of the girls had more depth to them.

3 of 4 people found this review helpful

  • Overall
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    5 out of 5 stars
  • tommythegreat
  • 11-01-19

Fun and great!

If you like litrpgs, and harem books you will love this one, I can’t wait for the next one.

3 of 4 people found this review helpful

  • Overall
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Alex S
  • 04-02-19

Anime and hentai trope system

Anime and hentai trope system. First 3 hours anime trope galore last 3 ish hours hentai trope. I honestly enjoyed it definitely worth a listen. okay but seriously can we stop with repeating the analyze stupidity.

2 of 3 people found this review helpful

  • Overall
    3 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    4 out of 5 stars
  • P. C. Gardner
  • 11-01-19

maybe I don't love anime enough

this book was okay. the story was kind of boring. unexplainably attractive guy moves from one girl trying to bed him to the next. maybe I don't know enough about anime to really appreciate this book, but it is more likely that this kind of anime is just trash. however, I gave the book an extra star because I don't know enough to appreciate it. to me the book just seemed kind of boring. also, I didn't love the expilict sex scenes though I didn't lower the rating because of it.

5 of 8 people found this review helpful

  • Overall
    3 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    2 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Holden
  • 08-02-19

narrator was not very good

narration needs work or new narrator. other than that the idea of this book is cool

1 of 2 people found this review helpful

  • Overall
    3 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    3 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    3 out of 5 stars
  • Ray Johnson
  • 05-02-19

Tropes galore, story is wanting

You may have heard me recently say that I am a fan of Anime, but really only hit something like 3 series altogether, those being Naruto, Inuyasha, and Cowboy Beboop. I have watched a lot of others, but I am really only devoted to those three. I have seen Death Note, Full Metal Alchemist, Bleach, Dragon Ball, etc. So, I may not be as knowledgeable as others I do know what anime is and the tropes it produces. So, I really thought I would love to give this a shot and see how this set in comparison to what I know about Anime tropes.
First of all, the narrator, David Reimer is going to play a huge factor in the score of this book. SO, I’m going to start with him. I want to say that he isn’t a horrible narrator, he does do some voices, and add inflections, but his normal reading of the non-dialogue bits really drops the ball. It was hard to tell if some of the bits would have worked with a different narrator, because he did not have a voice made for comedy or comedic moments. In Anime a lot of things are exaggerated including the way characters react vocally. Angry girls yell loud and talk fast, someone gets knocked for a loop and they (in the less serious anime) exaggerate their pain with moans as they speak. When they get hot and bothered they have a lovey dovey voice and none of that was done here, and it would have certainly helped. This was more of a mechanical reading, and it did not grab my attention. Again, I don’t want to bash, but if you are going to narrate an Anime styled book, do some research. Go to crunchy roll and watch a few shows and get a feel for what the tropes are like. Not having the narration fill in like it should have really hurt this book.

There were a few things that Atwater did as a writer that bothered me. One, I could tell when there was a typo because Reimer would say a wrong word, and while I always say that the narrator is the last line of defense against typos they ultimately are not to blame. Secondly, I really think that Atwater missed the mark with this book. At first it felt like it was going to be a kid friendly novel, but then POW sex scenes started popping up, and in every anime I’ve ever seen sex is hinted at, there might be some groping, but that is it. It really did not fit the spirit of the story, honestly if he was going to go Hentai I wouldn’t have had an issue, but it should have said so and I would have been fine with it, but this was the anime trope book. On the hentai topic I was a little surprised that he would so casually drop the F-bomb, but then would refer to a certain part of the male anatomy as his “horn”. He did this not once, but multiple times and I would have preferred any other euphemism than horn. It just felt very out of place. Again, I think that this book would have benefitted from one cohesive vision. If you are doing Anime then keep to the style of how they talk. I have never heard Inuyasha or Kagome utter the F-word. Additionally, the book is called Stone vs Viper and we never got to even see the viper until the end of the book. So, that was a bit of a disappointment. From what I could tell, Atwater did have some tropes down and he played them out well, but it was difficult to enjoy it like I should due to narration. Overall, the book has some real potential, but it didn’t make me not want to put it down or listen to it nonstop. Thankfully, it had a shorter run time.

Final score 6.6 stars, again I think a better narrator would have ratcheted up the score.



As seen on the Litrpg Audiobook Podcast.

2 of 4 people found this review helpful

  • Overall
    3 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    5 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    2 out of 5 stars
  • Andreas
  • 08-01-19

guy in a anime rape world

I really loved it in the beginning a guy from Earth transported to a anime world something I have never read before but then.. all the rape came, I mean srsly... at first the girls act like a anime character but it seems like the author lost that part later on and almost all of the girls act like normal humans at the end,and this isnt the type of anime were the girls are virgins either so it is a bit meh. The mc seem to hate the fact that he gets pushed into these tropes and pretty much starts to bash on every anime, something that was fun to listen to at the beginning but got tedious later on..
Every enemies he meets he will analyze with a skill this will read info about them, but the problem here is that even when there is no new info about them it still gets read ...every single time... I believe the author did this to artificially increase word count of his story not trying to bash or anything but the simple and easy was would be to write that there is no new info instead you hear this repeat over and over and you wonder if your device broke.
.

6 of 12 people found this review helpful

  • Overall
    3 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    1 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    3 out of 5 stars
  • Matthew
  • 03-02-19

Holy crap that’s bad narration

Seriously I love the idea behind this book and intend to read it in what little spare time I have but god, maybe it’s cuz I’m used to the likes of Jeff hays or nick podehl and the other common VAs but David, dude... might I suggest some peer review for a while because I have no nice way to put this, that was just horrible reading. Just. Horrible. I hate leaving a negative review normally I’ll just return the book and move on but that was painful

1 of 3 people found this review helpful

  • Overall
    2 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    2 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    1 out of 5 stars
  • Kindle Customer
  • 28-01-19

Just another lame book

This is a story about an mc who thinks he's much smarter than he actually is. He complains about anime incessantly, over and over. The fixture on repetition is aggravating in a already short book. A lot of the word count are these exact words "... level is not high enough" followed by childish insults that are described as "sassy".

Also this book has rape. A world with so much potential is squandered.

1 of 3 people found this review helpful

  • Overall
    3 out of 5 stars
  • Performance
    2 out of 5 stars
  • Story
    3 out of 5 stars
  • Joshua
  • 12-01-19

Imagine Fox News reading a erotica novel

The story was only meh in my mind. While we're told there is system, the rules of the system felt inconsistent.

Next is the narrator, I felt I was listening to the news, or a ringside announcer. Which was super awkward, especially during all the rape scenes.

Which bring me to the final point, there is only one consensual scene. That's it. So, if this might hurt your sensibilities, I'd recommend staying away. I doubt I'll continue the series.

1 of 3 people found this review helpful