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New Found Land: The Long Haul
- Narrated by: Elizabeth Evans, Elizabeth Jasicki, Graeme Malcolm, Jay Snyder, John Pirkis, LJ Ganser, Marc Vietor, Amber Reauchean Williams, Gregory Connors, Izabel Mar, John Zdrojeski, Steve Routman, Dash Katz
- Length: 8 hrs and 37 mins
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- Categories: Science Fiction & Fantasy, Science Fiction
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Legendary science fiction writer Neal Stephenson teams up with World Fantasy Award-winning author Sean Stewart (Galveston; Cathy’s Book) and Austin Grossman (Soon I Will Be Invincible) to present New Found Land: The Long Haul, a thrilling, hilarious, and mind-bending audio drama in the tradition of The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy. Fast-paced, funny, and deeply weird, The Long Haul is a warm-hearted, rollicking adventure about ordinary people rising to an extraordinary moment.
New Found Land: The Long Haul is performed by Amber Williams, Jay Snyder, Gregory Connors, Izabel Mar, John Zdrojeski, Steve Routman, Graeme Malcolm, John Pirkis, Elizabeth Evans, LJ Ganser, Marc Vietor, Elizabeth Jasicki and features the voices of Allyson Johnson, Carrie Seim, Josh Hurley, Kevin T. Collins, Khristine Hvam, Lauren Fortgang, Nick Sullivan, Raphael Corkhill, and Steve Rimpici.
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- McLeod
- 20-11-21
Convoluted
This was difficult to get in to and to keep focus on. I found the story to be convoluted and boring.
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- Bob
- 13-10-21
Hard to hear
For a multi cast recording the quality was hard to understand. Some actors voices were faint or muffled even in the same scenes as other performers whose voices were clear. So I might turn up volume only to be deafened by the next speaker.
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- P
- 04-07-21
Wasted my credit
I like Neal Stephenson a lot but could barely notice any trace of his style in this.
Production & acting is fine but I just found the story silly & not at all well written, I persevered & hoped I'd get into it but couldn't finish it because I just couldn't give a stuff about the story or characters.
It's also quite hard to follow & extremely fragmented.
So disappointed.
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- Ladycatfern
- 30-01-22
Dreadful sound editing
Some of the actors voices seemed to be whispering with next actor BOOMING. Hard to listen to with headphones so tried just on phone speaker. It was just as bad!! Pleased it was free. Had such potential too.
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- Andy Williams
- 11-07-21
Ambivalent I loved it and hated it
Drama was excellent. The story took a lot of getting going and I almost gave up a few times.
I have 2 kinds of stories, ones where I can’t get enough and the headphones are stuck all day and ones where I can have a nap for an hour here and there. Unfortunately this is more of a second variety. My guess is it reads better than it sounds. I love Neal and could almost tell by my interest in the story which bits he had written. I love dramatisations and cat wait for pat 2.
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- Tory Thai
- 12-06-21
You'll like this if you liked The Zeta Family.
Gave me some of the same feel good campy adventure as The Zeta Family by Gretchen Enders. Highly recommend that audiobook if you liked this.
This was amazing! I loved the audio drama format. The noise and sound effects were minimal and barely if any music. Every now and then for like introductions to chapters or events it may have a tune that ends when everyone starts talking but nothing too distracting. Only issue I had was some of the audio quality took a dip for dramatic effect when some of the characters were listening to tapes. It's a artistic choice that doesn't impact the story but some times I found it jarring.
Overall the story feels very episodic but also it isn't. Occasionally these characters dive into tapes that give a storyline from a different world. Once a chapter in this other worlds story it will continue in the 'modern/present time/world'. I liked this format as it was easy to jump in and out of to listen throughout a few days and pick up where I left off.
The use of a full cast was a great decision due to the number of distinct characters. I think without a full cast I probably would have struggled recognizing who was who as there were so many important characters to keep track of. The full cast gave everyone a distinct personality and voice that suited their character.
The plot was so much fun! It felt like a campy on the road modern fantasy adventure. It was also funny/cute too several moments got a chuckle or a giggle out of me as I really appreciated the kind of humor in this. The plots stacked on top of plots was easy to follow too thanks to the use of the full cast making it really distinct which storyline you were following and with what characters.
The characters were fun. Super outrageous, over the top fun and were fairly consistent. Character growth was lacking but I didn't really mind. I felt like the characters were already super fun and distinct that any growth would be hard to work in when they are already at 100.
World building was great too. I felt like the audio drama format did a great enough job at being descriptive where it needed to be and a use of sound effects for easily recognizable things to fluff out everything. I never once had trouble picturing what was going on.
Overall I felt really good with this. It's not a high tension or high anxiety adventure. It's more of a silly and light-hearted approach. There is some tenser moments, and of course these characters being hunted does darken the overall theme time to time but it never gets grim.
Highly recommend this if you're needing something fun and light.
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- Ashley Hartse
- 13-06-21
Fix the audio.
I really enjoy all of these that I’ve listened to (this one, sandman, and phreaks) and really liked the story line but the volume change is terrible. Why can I hear a door slam but then can’t barely hear someone talking and then as soon as I turn up the volume to hear someone the next person talking is super loud. It’s annoying and Takes a person out of the story for sure.
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- Amazon Customer
- 15-06-21
whimsical
along the lines of "men in black". if you enjoy Douglas Adams and other zany, light-hearted, imaginative fantasy, you will probably enjoy this.
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- Anonymous User
- 15-06-21
Fun, frivolous
Well acted. The story is fun, twisted and entertaining. Story is well written. Found it engaging.
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- brennan h.
- 11-06-21
Entertaining throughout
Storyline was great. Characters done well. Only criticism is there are awkward long pauses between chapters/ character change which made me think the playback had paused.
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- Rowan
- 10-06-21
So good!
Super entertaining and nice performances by the actors! I definitely recommend for all fantasy lovers.
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- JimmyD
- 19-06-21
Fantastic! Full cast is massively entertaining!
I wish we could tip the cast and producers... the voice acting, editing, and direction were phenomenal, and it was less like an audiobook than a full stage production. I'm looking forward to hopefully more productive of this caliber. Story-wise, it was the basic plot and story that made me select this title, and I was not disappointed -- very creative and well-thought out. Looking forward to more!
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- Wayne
- 19-06-21
I am glad this was free
Well produced and acted, but the story was just so silly and badly written, I had to quit halfway through.
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- M B Yorton
- 05-07-21
Sorry, just does not work for this old D&D player
I generally like alternate world / alternate timeline tales. But this one just seems contrived and petty. Made it through 14 chapters and just couldn't take it anymore. Shallow characters, stilted conversation, & no discernable direction to the plot. At least up to the point that I had to quit. It read like junior high conversation while rolling dice on a warped coffee table.
I must say, however, that there ARE some really interesting passages (tho quite brief), and maybe it turns out fantastic if you can make it to the last chapter, but . . . I need to spend my time with a better story. I think the basic idea does have really good POTENTIAL--with some very strong editing and a major rewrite; AND better character development, with a lot more depth.
Fortunately, this was INCLUDED with my membership so it has cost me nothing but a few hours time. BTW, I just finished a 13-book series of which I ended up purchasing, uh, eight or nine, I think; the first two (which got me hooked) and a later book or two were INCLUDED--and it turned out to be a 5-Star series! SO, I'm not slamming this book for being free! It just needs to grow up.
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- Amazon Customer
- 16-06-21
too complicated
difficult to keep the characters and their respective plot lines in coherent order.
the ending is very disappointing.
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