Trigger Warning for Infertility Needed

I don’t even know where to start. Honestly, I find R. L. Mathewson to be funny but after what I think is book 4 of this series that I’ve read, I also find the characters one dimensional and the running jokes getting old. Literally, she is writing the exact same male and female leads with one or two quirks that make them slightly different from her previous ones. This book particularly grated on my nerves. Can you please tell me how the Drs also seem to be her gynos? Did they have specialties out of the same office no less without speaking of them. And, at what point did you forget that if her endometriosis was that bad where she was getting a hysterectomy among other things, she managed to have painless sex. One of the first signs of endometriosis is pain during intercourse. Marybeth’s playing the martyr over and over and over and over was incredibly annoying. That wasn’t love. This book was a mess. The narrator was good, I just think she needs some help on the dad voices, she has them sounding like they are 80 year old men.

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Just Grow the F*ck Up

I am not sure who was more annoying, Marybeth or Darrin, with their silly bickering and selfish attitudes. Marybeth kept lying to hide the truth about her health issues from her so-called best friend Darrin. On the other hand, Darrin was physically violent and controlling, showing no respect for her mind or feelings. I tried but could not finish...

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Forget it

Double Dare you works for 7 year olds but 20 years later? Ridiculous!

Couldn't get past Chp 5. maybe it got better but I doubt it.

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Warning: Terminal illness

Any additional comments?

I listen to books to escape. I'm always looking for a book that's fun- interesting characters, witty banter. I wish there was a warning label that let you know that a book was going to delve into serious illness/ death. Didn't finish it. Too painful...

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Same storyline is getting old

I was hoping this would get better, but it just seemed to start getting on my nerves. Also a little hard to believe. First off, there could have been more of a storyline and less details of sex. I don't see how sex being used as a weapon between lovers is enjoyable- it seems more controlling. Sex with endometriosis is very painful and to have sex everyday for 6 years straight is very hard to believe unless you are a prostitute and even then that seems impossible.

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childish

i couldnt get thru it. the dares and double dares were too much for adults to play.

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Not my favorite

This is my least liked book of the series I know it’s profanity/erotic but too much of anything is too much. I really like the banter and the humor.
Can’t wait for more of the Pyte/Sentinel series.

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Went on and on and on...

Wished I would've loved it. Tried to stay with it but the story just dragged on. Every time I thought the story was heading somewhere the two main characters were either thinking about or having sex. Just became too much and difficult to finish. Found myself clinging to life wishing the story would end already.

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Don't do it

It's a waste of time and money! I've read some of Mathewson's books before, but this one is very disappointing.

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Disappointing addition to the series

2-2.5 stars

**Fair warning, I'll probably let a couple spoilers out in this review**

So...I found this addition to the series to be disappointing. At first, I thought Darrin and Marybeth were alright but by the end, I really didn't like Marybeth at all. The story was disjointed and confusing and I just wasn't very happy with what was done with the plot.

Marybeth works as a construction foreman (or should I say foreperson) at the Bradford construction company. When Marybeth was 15 she found out that she had medical issues that kept her from having kids. This caused her to lose her focus and she ended up dropping out of high school and dropping out, getting her GED later. Marybeth has known the Bradfords since she met Darrin the day her family moved next door to his.

Darrin is a Bradford and works for his uncle's construction company. Darrin and Marybeth met when they were only 7 years old. Darrin told her the first day they met that he was going to keep her and they were best friends ever since. Darrin always meant for them to become more than friends when they got older but the timing never seemed right and when it should have been, Darrin just couldn't get up the nerve to tell Marybeth how he felt about her.

The story starts out when Darrin and Marybeth meet as kids and skips forward a few times to show them together as friends until current time. TBH, this caused me some confusion because there are things that get mentioned and then we never hear about again (and it seems like we should have). When we get to current time, we find out that Darrin and Marybeth have been sleeping together for the last 6 years. There's also an indication that Marybeth has just broken up with a boyfriend and Darrin sees this as a good time to make his feelings known. Whether Darrin and Marybeth were sleeping together while she was dating this other guy is never really explained...I'm hoping not... Darrin and Marybeth seem to care about each other as friends but I never really got the "deep love" feeling between them....most of their interactions (through pretty much the whole book) seemed to be more along the lines of how badly they can torment each other.

Darrin and Marybeth have a thing between them were they always accept each other's double dares so Darrin tries to use this as a way to get Marybeth to marry him but it doesn't work out very well so he has to find other ways. The thing is, Marybeth never told Darrin about her not being able to have kids and keeps pushing him away because of it. He doesn't understand why she's pushing him away and lying to him. They even get married part way through the story (another disjointed part of the story that caused more confusion than clarification) and Marybeth is still lying to Darrin and treating him like crap! Even after they're married, Marybeth doesn't care about what Darrin wants and almost risks her life over her medical issues, telling him he has no input and it doesn't concern him. Now I don't care how much she's supposedly doing this for Darrin's good, she was being a horrible bitch. I lost all respect for Marybeth by the time the story ended...I'm glad Darrin got his HEA but I kind of wish it hadn't been with Marybeth.

Overall, this was a disappointing story. Obviously, I didn't like Marybeth...her inability to care about anyone but herself and her own feelings made me lose all respect for her. Uhg! Darrin was a bit of an idiot at times but he was the typical Bradford and was a good guy. He definitely made mistakes but he made them with the best of intentions...the Bradford men just tend to mess things up with their lady loves and have to work to make things right. The story...well most of it was confusing and disjointed and while I enjoyed a few parts, the majority of it left me feeling frustrated more than anything else.

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