Cringey

Decent litrpg story ruined by cringtastic “real life” portions and eye rolling life advice at the beginning of each chapter.

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A protagonist so bad it might be funny.

I spent the entirety of the book wondering at how the character could get a more convoluted backstory, and at every chance it became almost silly. The main character is introduced as a weathly young man, who learned how to fight on the streets..., after his family did evil things to show him what power was, then he ran a gang for some reason, then his parents die in a fire so he blames himself and all before the events of the book even start!! I can honestly say it gets deeper and more convoluted. I listen to books at work to pass time, but all I did during this book is roll my eyes. I wouldn't recomend it to anyone honestly.

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A new take to the typical litrpg

I really really like it.

You get the feeling right off the bat that this "Jack" isn't your straightforward protagonist. While trying to follow his instincts to help/loot he's also a Jackass, Non apologetic, clever, and dark.

His upbringing and background paint a picture of pain, anger, self destructiveness, confusion, and a deep deception.

That same upbringing allows a different angle to the typical Litrpg. Most Litrpg's I listen to have me wishing right off the bat for it to focus exclusively on the game. This one however, gives me nibbles and clues about the bigger picture and draw me into the outer story just as much as the inner, if not more.

By the time the last chapter rolls around I'm at the edge of my seat to see what "Jack" will do.

The 17 hour read time is also a great seller. A lot of other Litrpg's are less than half as good, half the time, and at a similar price.

I can't tell you how disappointed I was that there wasn't a second book on Audible yet.

The only complaint I have is that every single chapter the status is read. That by itself is fine except for the mile long list of traits by the end of the book. I'd much rather hear them say, "Traits Minimized" or just mention the important ones. A minor complaint, but a common one among Litrpg's.

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Only 2 negatives for me.

Really enjoyed the story over all, The negatives were only the Info updates at the end of the chapters, and the secondary story near the end. But that part may change when I hear the second book.

I liked the characters, story, and the humor. The players seemed like people you actually do meet in MMO's.

There is just enough detail that you can fill in the descriptive details in your imagination. ( I don't need to know that the crack in a cave wall looks like it's a crack in a cave wall....)

I also enjoyed all the banter. (yes a lot of it is totally pointless but that's what it's like playing with other people in games. )

I think Jeff Hays may ne by second favorite narrator. (Won't gush about my fav though.)

Can't wait for the next book!

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Great Genre Done Poorly

I just found out about this jonra of literature and found it very intriguing. However this particular novel I had some major qualms with. The first issue I had was that the typical glance at the character sheet turned into a large segment of the actual novel. I didn't need a refresher on every detail of the sheet at the beginning or end of every chapter. The performance was done quite well but the characters were so simplistic and one-sided that it fell flat. I doubt I will be reading the next book I didn't feel as if this was a cliffhanger as much as simply an unfinished story.

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Like an essay on the problems of being a prick

There are parts about the main characters personality that I like, he's not politically correct, not constantly whimpering about his emotions, and not afraid of the opposite sex.
What I don't like about the main character, is the fact that he is the kind of person that I would take great pains to avoid in my every day life. Someone who is just a complete prick to everyone they encounter, and is still surprised when nobody wants to be their friend. I have a hard time resonating with this character because he is just such an asshole.

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The writing is descriptive and not overly verbose

“Challenge” is the first book in the “Unbound Deathlord” series.  The book is authored by Edward Castle and the audiobook’s narration is expertly performed by, as usual, Jeff Hays.  In the very crowded Literary Role Playing Game (LitRPG) genre, this book sets itself apart by approaching the story from the perspective of a more evil or dark character (a deathlord) instead of your usual paladin or hero character.  It is a rather large book containing almost a thousand pages in the print edition and comprising nearly eighteen hours of audio.  Unlike many in the category, this book makes you feel you are actually experiencing a virtual game world.  If you enjoy LitRPG books, I believe you will enjoy this one.  Just be aware, the book is the first in a series, and it is the only one currently available in audiobook format.  I will be interested to see the direction the author takes this book.

If the sentence, “You awaken in a cold and damp dungeon”, sounds familiar to you, I think you get a good idea of the direction this will go.  The beginning of the story is nothing new from others like it, however I really was able to enter the world and it felt like a game rather than just another fantasy novel.  It felt polished and well edited.  One really gets a sense of the characters powers and abilities as he levels up; and who did not like this aspect while playing such games?  You felt the initial pain and struggle of a newly created level one character, and as the book progressed you felt the weight and struggles lift somewhat.  However, some of the newer quests matched or even exceeded the players skill level.  I thought the ranking system was also interesting.  Not only are we given a skill tree to understand, but the book also contained trait and class details as well.  Again, simply a nice touch adding depth to the story.

The world the author created consisted of many of the expected fantasy or adventure items and creatures.  There were swords, spiders, rats, but the author additionally included some different things such as a quite powerful illusion ring along with others.  Because the book was mostly focused on more dark characters, we were presented with vampires, ghouls, witches, along with other creatures who prefer the night.  Because the main character was a dark mage, there was some good detail provided around the magic system and the character’s process of learning it.  In many ways, the book is really a struggle between good and evil, however you are hoping evil wins in this case.  Jack thorn seems to be a rather unique player with a rather unique voice; covered in the narration section.

Although the book often filled with pokes, zings, or bantering between the players and NPCs, it also contained some serious and emotional scenes as well.  I thought the author did a decent job of taking us on an emotional rollercoaster from start to finish.  The opening sequence is action filled and emotionally charged.  That is not to say the book is overly deep or touchy-feely.  There is plenty of gaming humor and fun found within its pages.  The story is a bit darker than others in the genre, but it also deemed more complex and complete even though it is only the first book in a series of books.

The book’s narration was done very well by Jeff Hays.  With this book, I felt he was trying a new technique by voicing the main character and the narrator as two separate people.  Although the story was told from the perspective of the main character, the voice Mr. Hays used when the character spoke was quite different.  I’m not sure the voice of the main character fit what I expected him to sound like, but as with other parts of this book, it grew on me.  For the length of the book, the audio was performed flawlessly.  No noticeable audio artifacts were heard.  I also thought he did a good job of pacing the book’s narration.  I even enjoyed the games female Artificial Intelligence (AI) voice at the end of each chapter.  I will say that I did not enjoy the character stats given at the close of each chapter, however it began to grow on me and I wanted to hear how the character grew from the previous chapter.  Again, his level and skill elevation seemed to be in line with the actions he took during the chapter.

For parents of younger readers, I would not recommend this book as the subject matter is geared more towards an adult audience.  The book contains a fair amount of vulgar language (rather heavy at times), high-level sexual topics, and a few scenes containing intense graphic violence.  If any of these offend you, I suggest you grab a different book.

For someone to want to be placed permanently into a virtual world due to a life event, you have to feel for him.  Yet, even though he selects a dark character type, the story is written in a way that you want him to succeed.  The writing is descriptive and not overly verbose.  If you are a fan of the genre, I recommend you pick up Challenge by Edward Castle, and give it a listen.

Audiobook was provided for review by the narrator.

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1 to 100 in 3 seconds

I started this book with low expectations. But as time passed I could not put it down I want more I want more from this author I want to see what he can make in the next book. if you're new to LIT RPGs this is probably not the book for you. but if your long-time reader I recommend this one hundred percent.

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What did I jsut listlen to, that was amazing!

Where does Challenge rank among all the audiobooks you’ve listened to so far?

8th out of 200+

What was one of the most memorable moments of Challenge?

The ending

What does Jeff Hays bring to the story that you wouldn’t experience if you just read the book?

He adds great depth to the characters

Did you have an extreme reaction to this book? Did it make you laugh or cry?

I did not laugh or cry, but was very entertained with the drama

Any additional comments?

Great book, only thing I disliked was the constant verbal implication that a group was racist or xenophobic as it felt very forced into the dialog. The story had already described this and did not need the character telling the listener, it maid it feel forced and a cross between an agenda and a writer who was not sure about his story covering the point. Which I though they did well without the verbal comment.

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Impressive

Full character development, interesting plot hooks and intrigue to keep you riveted to the story.

Narrator is Jeff Hays, and as per usual, perfection. I don't know how he does it.

Can't wait for the next book in the series to hit audible.

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