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One More Last Time

A LitRPG/GameLit Novel (The Good Guys, Book 1)

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One More Last Time

By: Eric Ugland
Narrated by: Neil Hellegers
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A ruined life. A broken heart.

He thought it was the end, and his gun sat ready to make sure. But an oddball offer from his last friend comes at the literal last second. Curiosity gets the best of him, and he finds himself sucked into iNcarn8, a game claiming to be a whole new life.

Now, as Montana, the larger-than-life tank warrior, he has one more last time to get his life right.

©2018 Eric Ugland (P)2019 Tantor
Classics Dark Fantasy Epic Epic Fantasy Fantasy Fiction LitRPG Heartfelt
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I've listened to most of the big main title litrpgs available on Audible but this is by far my favorite! honestly just buy it now, then buy the rest in a few hours cos your gonna be hooked

by far the best litrpg

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After listening to the whole series that's available and just now finished a second listen through because it's just that damn good. Apart from the Excellant narrating, hat off to you sir, the story is compelling, well thought out and highly entertaining. Thank you all involved for this magnificent work.

Magnificent

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I enjoyed all of this one. The characters, the story, the narator. Only issue I had is that it was to short. A well.. Guess I just have to get book 2 for that issue

Highly enjoyable

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I really enjoyed the opening hook and pacing. The progression felt gradual and believable which is a big plus. The world was well established without feeling overwhelming.

If I'm nitpicking I would say the characters were not distinct in voice enough and the swearing became jarring at certain points like it was just inserted for punch. I would agree with the others here and say the character didnt feel like they completed a full character arc, as if it was only half a book I listened to.

Overall though a very enjoyable listen and I will be recommending it to others!

Strong Start

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As a first book, this wasn't a bad read for this genre. I'm used to longer books than this, so it did feel a little short and left off in an awkward spot as I'm not a fan of those type of up in the air endings when you have to wait ages normally for books to come out.

I nearly gave up on this very early on because for some reason the author has decided to make his character a moron. Want nearly caused me to give up was the MC's first actions when he got into the world. Despite the fact it isn't a game he keeps calling it a game. Despite knowing he has limited respawns he treats the idea of dying with a shrug of his shoulders. He decides to pull a James Bond type action where he used a coffin to escape down a mountain only the MC uses a shield. I mean how did he expect that to turn out exactly? And why do it at all? When that costs he said shield and his sword, does he go and try to find them? Nope. Why? Because monsters might have eaten them. Yes, monsters eat god forged legendary weapons all the time. They are great food sources and easy to eat and digest. So good in fact they are all giving up on flesh as a food source.

Still, after that it wasn't a bad read on the whole and I quite enjoyed it. It needs more work, as there really isn't much new here, and the continued stupid behaviour continues to the point I felt the author was forcing it. By that I mean the MC knows he must not show himself to be from another wold but keeps on using words and phrases that are obviously not going to be understood by the other people from the world he is on. Like he keeps calling people, "dude", or "buddy" and uses phrases like, "Out of the frying pan and into the fire."

For the most part the book is okay and as a base first book it is worth a read. It's not the best of this genre, but there are far worse ones out there too. I gave it 3 stars for the story, but I'd likely have pushed it to 3.5 if I could have. It's not quite a four, but not a 3 either. Very slightly above average because of the annoyances I had with the character being more moronic than I believed anyone actually would be in reality knowing they needed to be careful.

Some good, some bad.

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