Kinda hokey, but cute

This was a cute story but it was kinda hokey. The narrators did a good job though and I liked how the guy did the guy voices, and the girl did the girl voices.

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Hook and Marcie...sitting in a tree...

Quick, fast paced read. Marcie is back in her small home town to bury her mother...with a douchey boyfriend and a couple of his friends in tow. Too late, Marcie decides that she's had enough of the boyfriend, who is rapidly becoming abusive, and wants to break things off...but she decides to wait until they return to Seattle. She meets childhood friends, turned MC members, Stryker (Dillon) and Hook (TJ) at a bar and the bf gets jealous and possessive. Stryker and Hook were Marcie's protectors when they were kids and they will be her protectors now...although Hook's motives are different this time around. The chemistry between Hook and Marcie is palpable and we just know that trouble is in store. But the No Prisoners MC protect their own and Marcie is Hook's, so watch out douchey ex-bf! Lots of drama packed into this novella and everyone gets their just desserts! Now to catch up with the rest of the No Prisoners brothers...

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Love this series.

I am totally hooked on this series! Loved Hook and Marci's story! I cannot wait to listen to the next one. I have to say that this series has made my commute to work so much easier! Love this book!!!

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Love the mix on this audio

Short simple to the point with some drama and steam

Hook (TJ) was the guy with the sexy accent and great body. Marcie was only in town to bury her mother. She was determined to do things for herself even take care of an annoying mean spirited, crazy ex. There was sizzling hot chemistry from the moment they meet again. This time there was no age restrictions. This time there was no holding back. Oh, well maybe just a bit for a shot time.

I found that ways this one was mixed with the male female combo was just fab. I have found only a few where they use duo narrators and mix them where the female do those parts and the male do the male parts. I love it because it allows for a more believable narration. No male trying to sound feminine or vice versa. This was a knock out the park.

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Short and Sweet!!

So far I've listened to three of Lilly Atlas books and loved every one of them and the narration being how it is makes it that much better. Moving on in the list of books hope more is available on audible from both MC'S that she has writen about so far!!

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Holy smoking hot bikers

This story does not disappoint. The narrators we're awesome. The story was great. And I wish there were bikers like Hook in real life!

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Stubborn girl reunited with old pals

Marcus is a gal whom has overcome her past, or at least she thinks she has. She returns home after 10 years to bury her mama, and runs into two of her favorite people from her past. Now they belong to the local MC club. Striker and Hook have always looked out for Marcie, and now is no different, except now Marcie is stubborn in thinking their help makes her look vulnerable and weak. Marcie struggles with this feeling throughout this short book, and you will laugh and blush as well. This book does have a nice HEA. Look forward to reading about the rest of the No Prisioners Club.

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story was ok really short

I hated the woman's narration. like the man's voice. story was really short but ok.

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OK... not very fleshed out

OK for a short story. Author tried to develop the characters, but they weren't very fleshed out. Way too rushed, mostly, and the "climax" was kind of ridiculous. I didn't buy the villain's sudden psychotic break, and there's a big difference between independent and tstl. She straddled that line a little too closely IMO.

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Not a fan of the performances..

I’ll be honest.. I hated the performances. They couple was supposed to be from the mid west, but the lead female was given a sticky (unrealistically so) southern bell voice (why?) and the lead male was given a heavy Australian accent despite being raised there as well (the book said his parents came over, didn’t say he was born in Australia).. it just didn’t jive at all and only served to distract.
Outside of that, my issue with the story had more to do with the female lead. Basically, she’s a b*tch. She really does engender any kind of sympathy. Her talk of independence just drives you crazy because it’s more than that. She’s just being rude and mean. Seriously, no man would have stuck around for what she puts out on the b*tch meter.
I feel like the author could have toned down some things regarding the female lead but outside of that, the book was ok I guess. I would prefer to have read it so I wasn’t so distracted by the crazy narration.
It’s rare for me to give such harsh criticism on these so please do take my warnings to heart if you’re looking to purchase this one. I’m just thankful it was free for me, otherwise, I’d have been pissed.