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Excise (A Post-Apocalyptic LitRPG)

Ether Collapse, Book 2
Narrated by: Luke Daniels
Series: Ether Collapse, Book 2
Length: 16 hrs and 40 mins
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Summary

Otherworldly invasions. Nuclear meltdowns converted to dark power. A quest assigned by the planet itself.
 

Three weeks ago the world started anew as buildings literally stood up, fearsome monsters materialized, and humanity’s way of life changed forever. Now, Rockland Barkclay must continue to protect his people from a new threat while dealing with internal issues that keep popping up. For instance, will he choose to heed the warning of his resurrected Ancestral Guide as she notices the edges of an ancient conspiracy?
 

Things take a turn for the worse thanks to a freshly awakened God - or was it the fearsome evolution of Earth's wildlife? Regardless of the cause, the group discovers something dark and twisted in the Atlantean System, invited by a recent unmanned nuclear catastrophe.
 

The apocalypse isn’t over; it’s just luring everyone into a false sense of security.

©2019 Ryan DeBruyn (P)2020 Mountaindale Press

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  • MK
  • 30-01-20

A bit disappointing

A lot of filler not a lot of progression.

the entire start of the book is simply describing how Rocky is delusional and seeing things.

Then they get to his territory go on two expeditions to do things and the books over.

also the fighting was mostly just
"we cant possibly win!"
Rocky: "let me try this wierd ring"
"omg your so amazing rocky"

no new skills, plans or forethought. No progression or answers just a vague hint that the society in the past was sexiest. oh and Mars is waking up but he didn't say its name cause that would make it an answer to a question the reader has.

not sure why the author bothered writing this as it's just frustrating how much filler there is. if you've read this review you know everything you need to read the next one. My advice skip this one and hopefully there's some better writing in the next one.

Also luke for the last time warrior is not pronounced like that:)


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The main character is such an annoying character

The main character is such an annoying character

In the first book he was ok but in this one he was just egotistic and bad

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That was great!

When I listened to the first book of this series I was unsure about it but Holy Atlantean !!! That book was fantastic could not stop listening to it!!

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Great 2nd book

cant wait for the next one. hopefully with more antics from Azoth, Roxky and Sela

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Okay

It was okay. Entertaining enough to finish, but the writing quality isn't where it needs to be. A lot of dialogue and game prompts are unnatural, and there are a great many misused words, or words that are just invented when there are already perfectly good English words that could have been used in their place.

I also kinda get the feeling that the author freaked out about the reviews slamming his fake cursing and put a band aid on it at the beginning of this book. It didn't work. The language filter in a story that takes place in the real world was ridiculous.

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excellent second book

loved it great addition to the series love were the story is going . great characters and excellent narration can not wait for the next one

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 13-01-20

not as good as the first, still better than most

the story kind of drags and seems directionless as nothing really gets done, maybe too much was tried to be stuffed into the story. if more time was devoted to each "act" I think the story would have ended better with each idea being more developed.

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  • Christopher
  • 12-01-20

Writing is improving, but the author still REALLY needs a better character editor.

If you liked the first book then you will definitely enjoy this one. The story was once again compelling and interesting. Plus the author addressed the biggest sticking point in the first book, which was the ubiquitous, Rated-G cursing.

The main thing still holding this book back is something that seems to be more and more common in contemporary GameLit. It’s the inexplicable fascination that writers seem to have with moronic and inept MC’s, whose actions are constantly contradicting their character or even just basic common sense.

At best, this is an extremely frustrating and annoying way to create tension. It’s a classic device used most prominently in bad horror movies to manufacture tension and suspense... It’s the, “No, No! You dumb, horny, big-booby’d, blonde, teenage girl who is actually 23 in real life! Don’t go into the dark, scary basement by yourself!!!” trope.

However, since this is a LitRPG book, and not a B-grade horror film, and the MC doesn’t have any of the aforementioned “traits,” the result is that the cheap plot-device just makes you mad.

Note to the Author:
Do Not, heavily foreshadow the obvious possible solutions to a problem and then have the MC repeatedly scratch his head and say, “Gee, I wish there was some way to deal with this obstacle. I better dick around for a while and act contrary to my character, and then wait around some more until there’s a moment where it looks like everything is about to collapse, and only then, I’ll “magically” remember to pull out the obvious and over-foreshadowed solution to my problem that would have negated the whole situation in the first place, and then I’ll... SAVE THE DAY!!! ... again... for the 7th time.”

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Have him think to himself, “Wow! I’m in the middle of this scary, evil dungeon, full of high level monsters, and I’m hunting my devious adversary... Hey! I just picked up something moving fast in my peripheral vision! I think I’ll just blink and stand right where I am until something kills me..., OR..., one of my friends saves me in the nick of time!!... It’s not like I’ve been perpetually in danger and fighting dangerous adversaries for more than a month now. There’s no way I would have adapted my behavior when I’m in obviously dangerous situations. No Way at All!!... especially not for the... 7th time.”

See how annoying that is?... Yeah.... Then cut-it-the-eff-out! No one wants to read or listen to that garbage. You’ve got a great story here. Stop pissing on it!

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  • Twon
  • 09-02-20

Awesome Adventure

I really enjoy this book. The author really put a lot of work into this book and you can tell. from the beginning to the end I have not missed a single moment. The MC is the best idea I've ever seen in a book. He's not to OP or too overwhelming with strange powers.i wish I could see a live game or movie of this it would be nice. book one was fun book two to me was crazy. bring out more and more players little by little keeping on my toes to see what's going to happen. yet, not leave any stone unturned. if u get what I mean.

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  • Anonymous User
  • 03-02-20

good books need more

I really liked these books ..but ran into same problem as many other books on here in them not being finished series

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  • John
  • 12-01-20

Luke saves the day again

Luke saves this one in my opinion. First and foremost I really love the concept and the worlds building going on and without going into great spoilers the MC and the people of old earth are getting slammed up against huge XP wall ( a grind ) that doesn't seem to being going away and getting worse, Not to mention the issue with other factions coming into play that have been dealing with this gameish universe for a looooong time, it literally will be stone-age people fighting against far more advanced civilizations with no hope in sight. They just keep having silly setbacks dealing with minor things like other humans aways being dumb without knowing the way bigger picture.

This book in my opinion the MC didn't grow one bit, yes the the little town did some but humanity as a whole lost way more than gained. In the end I will give it one more book before I drop this series, unless something changes. Like the author lets us know WTF is going on with the rest of the planet and not some little valley and some butt hurt guy wanting to take over some xyz city. I just have a bad feeling that Rocky is going to want to travel to xyz city to find his family next and during that time other civilizations are coming closer and closer.

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  • morgan
  • 10-02-20

Great books

Really interesting storyline. I can't wait for the next book. Luke Daniels is as always awesome with his reading.

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  • Kate Juden
  • 08-02-20

wonderful

I love the little references to the Algonquins and hope that Smith takes a bigger role in future books. Atlantis, the City of Gold, Asgard....the author weaves the legends into the story beautifully. I love the mythos he has created and look forward to many more books.

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  • Charles F. Fritz II
  • 03-02-20

LitRPG greatness!

Ryan doesn’t disappoint with his second installment in the series. I was on the edge of my seat most of the time and the expansiveness the new turns opened up are exciting to say the least.

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  • Mary
  • 31-01-20

This is one of my favorite books

This is one of my favorite books currently. I look forward to more to come.

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  • Harley S Marciel
  • 29-01-20

I'm liven it. it's like a video game in a book

I'm liven it. it's like a video game in a book. I love the gient golems.

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