Interesting but bit slow

This story has an interesting premise but was a bit too slow for me for a lot of the story, although I liked the main characters well enough and some of the interactions were done very well. However this picked up at the end so much Im getting the next book as the audio isn't availble yet. Narration by Hellegers was done very well as has his other work I have came across so no issues there. As this is the first in series giving this one a bit of latitude and calling it 4 stars overall.
I requested this audio and have decided to leave my thoughts for everyone.

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I couldn't stop listening to it!

A very enjoyable book. I love the status page aspect! and the blessings in it were a very original idea but mana on the other hand wasn't original but diverted. As much as it was the same thing a lot of the time it kept me coming back and I couldn't stop listening to it! I recommend it to people who are interested in RPG games.

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“Success forgives all sins”

Took me a little while to get my head around the magic system and wasn’t sure I was going to gel with the fact the MC’s a teenager, but once I got into it, I didn’t want to put it down!
Really great story and I can’t wait to hear more!
Great narration too, with great character voices and pacing that perfectly suits the story!
This is my honest opinion on a free review copy.

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that ending

long and short of it is to enjoy this book first don't focus on the fact that the main characters in A Time loop until the end of the first loop all of what he does in the first five years are very important in understanding the characters around him and how how the main character feels with him hafting to spend time away from them you was the reader should miss the characters from the first 5 years has the author does an excellent job of of characterizing them although you probably won't miss Sarah. the books a bit slow and largely Focuses on character interaction and the main character what are there are some very good fights and the main character games some awesome abilities it's grounded in in in worldbuilding and socialisation between the main character and friends and enemies

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Enjoyable story

I enjoyed the concept of the story but found the narration difficult to follow. I couldn't always tell there was a new chapter and I was constantly having to go back to listen again. I also found the narrator was sometimes speaking too fast.
Will not stop me from listening to other books in the series.

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Epic

Great book with a addictive story and character and with great narration can’t wait for the next one

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had potential

There are interesting parts the idea is great but the overall style is just bad

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Enjoyable Timeloop tale

Well Narrated.
For those who are fans of the timeloop(groundhog day) genre then this is a fun read. Though Mother Of Learning does it better.

If there's one con I've got to say about this story, it would have to be the word 'atunement'.. seriously, one could play a drinking game on how many times that word is said throughout the book and be drunk after the first chapter.

Still, worth a read. But there are other timeloop stories I'd recommend more.

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The story is okey, but it is really bad written.

It starts interesting, and then it skip 3 months, have a small encounter, skips 3 more, and then you have a dungeon, and skips 6 more months.

And then I gave up 3 hours in.

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