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My Secret Portal to a Fantasy World Omnibus: Books 1-4

By: D. Levesque
Narrated by: Giancarlo Herrera, Hannah Schooner
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Jack Pritcher has hit rock bottom, losing his home and job. Just when he believes his sanity might be next, he's presented with an opportunity that sounds utterly unbelievable.

The offer on the table is to become a guardian of a Portal, a doorway to another world. But there's a twist–he must keep it a secret. Portals, it turns out, are alive in some way. They possess sentience and dictate their own set of rules that guardians must follow, under the penalty of death.

As Jack delves deeper into this enigmatic role, he uncovers remarkable benefits that he's not willing to jeopardize by disregarding the rules. Along this extraordinary journey, he learns that his old landlord, the elusive Mr. Peebody, had been a guardian for years, amassing his wealth through the Portals. Now, Jack inherits that legacy, with the excitement of boundless opportunities. The only catch? Survival, because the world on the other side of the Portal is a far cry from Earth's safety.

©2023 D. Levesque (P)2025 Royal Guard Publishing LLC
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overall its good but skips over alot like getting new abilities and important battles so on and for a beast master doesn't seem to focus on his class only focusing on everything but just not very reminiscent of a true beast master at all

good but...

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good book doesn't focused to much on his class and misses battles the 4th one was ever jack was nerthed or the wrighter forgot things he put in the other 3 books idk but the 4th one had me thinking I had alsimers.

good books

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I gave the story 4/5 because I thought the concept was an innovative take on RPG, as well as highlighting some disturbing traits of humanity beyond the low-hanging fruit of straight racism and misogynism.
I gave the performances 4/5 mainly for Hannah Schooner, in this, my first time hearing her performance. Thank God there's a female VA out there who is capable of both British and US accents. Giancarlo Herrera needs to go back to Scottish school, at least.
D. Levesque loves his harem RPGs, and this one was quite PG, though there is alot of cussing.
So, whilst these women are three of THE most likeable women in harem RPG (and I DO NOT SAY THAT LIGHTLY.... I usually dislike the women in this genre, because they're so badly written.... by men!), there's still not much in the way of character establishment or development, beyond their curves, beauty, primary class and major thing for Jack, of course!
I gave the overall score of 3/5 because:
1. most glaringly having paused at chapter 12/37 in book 3, WHAT THE HELL IS A PORTAL GUARDIAN??? What is he good for? WHY does he need all those extras? I can tell you that he DOES NOT guard or monitor the portal!!! I am assuming the portal is there because of the lack of nexus stones. So what? Why is the main character needed? And i agree with the other reviewer.... I was looking forward to experiencing clever twists to the skills of the Beast Master class. But, Jack might as well be a healer and a rogue, no?
2. I also had to pause here because I am absolutely SICK, TOOOOOO DEATH, OF EVERY CHARACTER EXCLAIMNG, "DAMN! DAAYYUUM! DAM!" 12 ways from Sunday EVERY TWO SECONDS.... IN EVERY WORLD; as well as EVERY CHARACTER having a MASSIVE GRIN on their face, or performing ANTICS!!
Did this author not get an editor, or something?? Come ON! It would be bad enough to have to read it, but it is at least five times worse to have to LISTEN to frequent, repetitive phrases and words! And such UNoriginal words and phrases. They even had Jack saying "damn" inappropriately at one point - not NEEDED at all!

So, the actual writing is not this author's best, which is a shame, really....

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