Amanda is in her room fuming, feeling like she doesn't have a life of her own. Up in the attic, an alien monster and its slimy tentacles are ready to make a move on her. The monster has watched her grow up, and now as she sits on her bed lonely and ovulating, it slithers in, preparing to brutally inseminate her.
CONTENT WARNING: This story contains dubious consent, erotic breeding descriptions, and triple penetration. It's a brutal monster orgy with family values at the center.
©2012 Kat Shields (P)2012 Kat Shields
The first two chapters in the book was exciting and erotic but by the third chapter the narrator started making errors while narrating the book which was quite obvious. I also think that the book ended rather stupid I was expecting a little more as to what happened after she got pregnant.
"Doesn't make a heck of a lot of sense"
I really doubt it.
She kinda pained me to listen to honestly and now and then it felt like she was stumbling over the script. However she did pull off the whiny annoying schoolgirl really well.
Honestly who would ever have tentacles double penetrating them and be like 'I'm going to try to read from my textbook now!' How completely ridiculous!
I realize it's smut but there's no reason it has to suck. The schoolgirl is annoying, the plot makes no sense and even the sex scenes were off. Some parts where just repetitive where she just goes over and over the same idea. It really didn't make sense and I wouldn't read it again.
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