Who’s the daddy?

The story was simple. Who impregnated Eliza?
There was a lot of repetition of facts we already knew-the book could have been much shorter and had a better pace about it.

I guessed it had to be one of two scenarios and as it unfolded, for me there was no revelation. The answer was obvious.
However, the book was a freebie, therefore, it was entertaining enough.

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Absolutely awesome

Different storyline. Ive never read something quite like this
Nice twist in the end and interesting characters

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Good story

Such a shame about the narrator, she had a grating pitch to her voice and I couldn’t listen to the story to the end. The story was good, would have listened to the end with a better narrator.

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What a premise

I just loved this, so original and thought provoking. At times you just felt for everyone involved and I loved how the author made that happen. There were no winners here. I cant say more due to spoilers. I did like the narration and I felt it worked with the story line and brought more power to it.
This was yet another great find on the audible plus catalogue.

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Great book

if you like who done it books with twist and turns , then this is a book for you . The book is well written with characters that are believable. It is wrll performed and will keep you guessing until the end . A must read

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Intriguing

Good story, great twist, however I found the narrator awful. I stopped listening a few times to take a break from her voice, story was intriguing so I did keep going back.

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so so...

predictable twist, narrator sounds like a robotic news reporter. was in the plus catalogue so no real complaints.

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Very drawn out...

I kinda guessed the plot very early on, took ages to get to the point.
Very long and drawn out, with the ending feeling like it was rushed and condensed.
Glad it was free and I didn't waste a credit.

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Fantastic title….. gripped from the very start.

Will certainly be looking out for other titles from this author. It was a gripping listen. Loved it from the very first page. Worked out the ending before it finished but it was still really good. Loved the narrators too. Top marks and this was also a freebie from audible. Very happy.

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Good story, but narrated as a news broadcast and too much tell instead of show

Show don’t tell. That doesn’t really apply for this book. There is too much explanation, for instance about what the characters feel or why they do certain actions. This doesn’t leave much room for the listener for their own interpretation and can even become patronizing.
Apart from that it was a captivating story. Unfortunately, the book is narrated as if someone reads a news story out loud. I really missed empathy and the narrator ‘feeling’ the story. The story and the twists made it that I continued listening, but otherwise I would have quit after the first chapter.

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