Rescue
Adventures on Terra, Book 3
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Jill Smith
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R. A. Mejia
Armon Ellington died on Earth and was transported to Terra, a world governed by rules eerily similar to the RPG games he loved. He found he could gain levels, skills, abilities, and magic just like he could in those games. In addition to finding a way to become more powerful, he also found the friends and family he’d always longed for. Unfortunately, he also discovered the pain of losing them.
Now, Armon finally has the information he’s been searching for. He knows where the kidnapped kobolds that the Imperare took are. A city deep in the heart of the Imperare Empire and a place renowned for its gladiatorial arenas. Now Armon just has to solve the small problems of breaking out of jail, evading capture, getting into Imperare Empire, and coming up with a plan to rescue the kobolds from whomever has them.
Join Armon and his friends on the final leg of their quest to rescue the members of his adopted family, the Red Claw Tribe of kobolds.
Adventures on Terra is a LitRPG adventure.
©2018 Ramon Mejia (P)2018 Ramon MejiaAdventures in Tara
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Sweet
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enjoyable but some annoying traits
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From a performance standpoint there are a lot of gaps between dialogue which ruins the flow. There are moments where lines are repeated. There are moments when the narrator has to clear her throat. This should all be edited out. I like her narration, she's got a lovely voice. Just not the best quality control.
The story could do with a number of cuts, such as reducing the references. I tend to chuckle at the initial reference, but then the story keeps talking about it. Also, I know it's a LITRPG, but the damage notifications could be vastly simplified to improve fight flows. I'm looking at you magic missile.
Badly Needs an editor
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