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Awakening

A LitRPG Story (Outworld, Book 1)

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Awakening

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What do you desire in exchange for your soul? Everlasting youth? A million dollars? Women? Power?

Bored high-schooler Adam Staples wants for nothing. Such an offer could only be a prank, right? Who would have thought that the prankster is a demon in disguise?

After selling his soul and turning into a half-demon, Adam finds himself orphaned and dragged into a realm outside of the world he knew. Training under his benefactor and enrolling in a school made for those who were gifted with powers, Adam ventures around the Outworld to hunt down the demon that turned his life inside out...and perhaps to squash a bit of the guilt he carries for what he had done to his family.

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I really like the concept of this story, I also quite like the MC and all his badly explained OPness. the narrator is great with a wide array of voices.

Unfortunately the writing quality leaves a lot to be desired, show dont tell is in this case show AND tell and tell some more. the MC also seems to completely forgot his earthly origins towards the second half of the book.

still deciding whether im going to push through to the second book in the hope that the writing catches up to the quality of the concept.

rough ride with a lot of promise

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can't wait for the next book is it written yet!!!!!!!! need to know what happens next!!!?

totally gripping

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i quite liked the mc although he's seriously op.
bad guys were all from one template ... 'i am unbeatable you minnow!' types
everyone is confused and the word 'huh' is definitely overused when the battles commence ... use a thesaurus mate!
if you can get over new enemies appearing for no apparent reason and the mostly unexplained 7 year gap in narrative while the mc achieves his superpowers the story is okay but I'm
not sure I'd rush out to buy book 2.

Too much 'huh?'

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It's a sound concept; Self obsessed gamer who has no aspirations for his life beyond pulling in bit coin and playing games accidently makes a deal with a demon. Managed to barely survive and then uses the demonic powers gained to start hunting demons.

The issue is not the concept it's the writing. The writing is awful. Pacing is all over the place. Our MC suffers through multiple chapters of badly linked scenes before the story even really gets going and while that's happening every other word feels like it's been pulled out of a thesaurus. Why does everyone have a countenance?!

Honestly skip this and listen to anything else.

Not Worth the Credit

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and absolutely loved it. think the first time i mustve just been to busy or something.

came back to this book.....

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