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Harley Merlin 2: Harley Merlin and the Mystery Twins

Narrated by: Amanda Ronconi
Length: 12 hrs and 47 mins
4 out of 5 stars (112 ratings)
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Summary

A dark past. A hidden power. A dangerous enemy.

Harley Merlin has a lot of unanswered questions in her life. What drove her father to kill her mother? How can she know the true extent of her magical abilities? Has Wade Crowley always been this annoying?

After the violent gargoyle incident that left many dead, Harley fears what other evil tricks her psychotic aunt has up her sleeve. When she discovers that magical foster kids like herself are in danger, she knows she must do whatever it takes to protect them.

And it turns out that Tatyana, the Coven’s resident ghost-whisperer, is also willing to make sacrifices and has secrets of her own...

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*Beware of spoilers in the reviews below that are without spoiler alerts*

©2015 Bella Forrest (P)2017 Bella Forrest

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Interesting story

Facebook would come up with this series comparing it to Harry Potter series. I will start by saying that the series should not and cannot be compared to the HP series they are different and interesting within their own right! What I will say for anyone wondering about the differences within the series: JKRoling creates the wording world and this series focuses more on the mystery part of it all! the story introduces us to The manor and how the world within the mannor itself but so far not beyond it like The Harry Potter Series. That is that all I will say for anyone who expects another style of HP series! Yes though as the story suggests there is manic involved.
The Secret of Spellshadow Manor so far is that if a mystery about why all of the events happen. It is the reason why the reader/listener keeps going to get the answers along with Alex. The story does focus on the thoughts of Alex and the actions of getting home as well getting answers about the mannor.
I enjoyed the story and the narrator did a great job!

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Harley Merlin Book2

really enjoying this book series and looking forward to listening to the rest of the series when available.

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Enjoyable listen

Entertaining. So good to find a new series of books that are easy to listen to, good narration, and the story continues to develop. Biggest disappointment, why hasn’t audible got the rest of the series recorded yet!? I know amazon have them in book and kindle format but it’s not the same as being able to listen whenever I want. Come on Audible, catch up! Please.

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Best book ever<br />

Loved it, outstanding book and hard to beat, whoever wrote this, thanks ever such a lot

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fantastic.

couldn't stop listening to it. intrigued to see what book 2 holds.
of your a harry potter lover you would love this book.

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Disappointed

I absolutely love the girl who dares to think series so assumed this would be just as good. wrong.... Really sad I spent a credit on this. Characters are dull and forgettable, story is just plain boring.

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  • Esther
  • Norwich, Norfolk United Kingdom
  • 09-02-18

Great story, will download the 2nd one

This was a great story and really eerie in places but the voices of the reader were sometimes off putting.

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Underdeveloped....

I did not enjoy this audiobook. The characters were under developed as was the storyline. There were parts of the plot that were just not explained and it was all just a bit underwhelming. I will not be reading any other books in the series.

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Jeez - can not believe there is a series!

Nothing happens! Its dull, pointless and so far fetched it's crazy! Move on - nothing to read here!

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very slow with no conclusion

No where near like Harry Potter. I feel like I've not really learnt anything more about the story. major events happen and there are no consequences for them. confusing

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 19-11-17

different

different but not bad, darker than what I thought it would be. But interesting excited to listen to book 2

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  • Karon Bonnell
  • 25-07-17

NO NO NO!

This is NOT for those who love Harry Potter. ....not even close. Really misleading advertising. Don't buy it.

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  • Juli J.
  • 10-07-17

NOT HARRY POTTER

I was fooled by the hype on Facebook. This is nothing like Harry Potter. I only finished it hoping it would have a good ending. The end leaves you hanging and I don't care enough to find out what happens in the sequels.

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  • Mark Heckendorf
  • 12-07-18

Don't buy it yet

There are 6 books to this series - there are only the first four on audible. So if you get hooked, you will be very disappointed you cannot get all 6. Audible, you want to purchase the first two thirds of my car?
MarkH

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  • Felecia Sconiers
  • 16-02-19

I liked it

I got a little annoyed with the lack of common sense connections that were being made way too slowly almost unrealistically slow. but enjoyed the story and am loving this series.

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  • Howard
  • 12-02-19

Has potential, but a tough listen

There are some interesting elements to the book, However, I don't think if it knows whether or not it wants to be a children's book. I am guessing the sweet spot is teens. I was a Harry Potter fan and the sheer creativity allowed me to escape into innocence. This book does not quite make it, seeming a bit formulaic. There are a few other issues that prevented me from suspending disbelief:

The main character is an empath. Which is an interesting way to illustrate the emotional content of the characters. But the author uses this as a crutch and doesn't provide enough direct plot. The book would be better if the characters, settings, and character interactions told the story which I could interpret, allowing me to suspend my disbelief and enter the story. However, there is so much inner monolog with a given character telling me what I am supposed to see and feel that I never get a chance to engage the material. And if the author has chosen to really expose the emotional content of the characters, they need to be full characters. It seems to me that most of them barely break the surface of archetype.

The book uses the term magical repeatedly to differentiate those with magic and those with out. After the first couple of pages I understand that there are people who have magic. It would be akin to me using the term human in every other sentence. Unless I am specifically discussing aspects of the human race or the human condition, I don't use the word. It is unnecessary.

Similarly, there is another device in the book, an item which focuses magical power, called an espree (sp?). The book constantly mentions them, but they do little to advance the plot. They are completely unnecessary. I feel the books would be better with out them. They just seem awkward.

Anyway, I might give the next book a try to see if things have matured. There is some potentially interesting lore here, but I am guessing I will move on. This is just my two cents obviously. I certainly can't write fiction, but I have an opinion. And you know what they say about those.

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  • Connie
  • 04-02-19

Trouble with download file.

I'm trying to download it for the second time because I cannot see the chapter list, and if I pause it, it replays from 2 or 3 chapters earlier than where I left the book. About the series, I know that Harry Potter fans will either love it or hate it. There are some areas where the two worlds seem to overlap, but there are some important differences. I'm trying to lower my expectations of the Merlin series, and to appreciate it in its own right. I think seen like that, it's an entertaining story full of action and surprises. I like the main female character, although in the second book you get to see the story from other perspectives and that makes the story more interesting as well.

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 04-02-19

Good story with interesting characters

My teenage daughter and I enjoyed listening to this book together. I like that even though there is some love interests brewing, The characters aren't always trying to jump in bed. That seems to be the norm for a lot of YA books of late. I also like that the "good guys" aren't perfect and some of the antagonists have a little back story to explain what may have gone wrong. I'm looking forward to the rest of the series.

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  • Bryan S Guzman
  • 01-02-19

meh

while this wasn't bad It feels like our snarky hero lost her edge from the last book and became slightly dumber for the sake of a dramatic narrative. this while not bad was a step down from a great first book.

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  • Eric
  • 01-02-19

Not Harry Potter but great book

One of the things I’ve noticed regarding the reviews about this book is that many people thought it was going to be another Harry Potter. I think that was an unfair characterization, I believe this book should be allowed to stand on its own merits. In my opinion, the story is engaging, filled with drama and intrigue. The main character is filled with fire always ready to defend her family and friends. So, I hope the people who wrote a review would please set aside their Harry Potter impressions and please give this story another look because it is well worth the buy.