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The Emerald Blade

The Landkist Saga, Book 2
Narrated by: Kirby Heyborne
Series: The Landkist Saga, Book 2
Length: 24 hrs and 22 mins
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Summary

One down. Five to go.

For Kole, Linn and the newly-minted heroes of the Valley, their recent victory is short-lived in light of new revelations.

The King of Ember is alive. But the man who once led his people against the forces of darkness is changed. His path now takes him to the north and a land called Center, where he intends to bring his power to bear against another would-be God.

While Kole and Linn gather a small company to follow the King, another group heads for the northern deserts, intent on discovering what power the Emberfolk left buried in the sands. The Dark Months have faded, but the light cannot last. The time for hiding is over.

It's time for the World to meet the Landkist.

©2017 Steven Kelliher; 2018 Podium Publishing

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Promising but didn't live up to what it could be.

Okay, firstly what I liked about the first two books. The magic - for want of a better word - system is a solid one. Various characters each with different abilities, from flames, earth, healing, air or mystical seer like capabilities. This all works well and does not overpower completely those that do not have such gifts.

I also like the overall plot of the story with the Sages, the darkness and the world apart, though by this stage two books in I would like to have seen a little more light shined on exactly what is going on with they Sages and why they are fighting, and what the world apart is exactly, but I'm not quite at the point where it is annoying me the vague nature of it.

My problems start with what for me is the most important part of a book, and that is the characters themselves. The author has just managed to make them look like a bunch of utter morons. Half of what they say and most of what they do is just idiotic. They are constantly acting on preconceived ideas of people based solely off stories and conjecture about their history and individuals from that history. None more so than Cole, who annoys me the most of all the characters, and as he is effectively the main one that isn't good.

To give examples of moments that really made me want to fling the book across the room. Cole, a man trained for years to be a warrior. A man who often refers to themselves as killers. A man who has killer men by setting them on fire, chopping off limbs and heads or by running them through. And yet with all that he has a hissy fit when he uses his magic in a new way to kill someone, a fact mirrored by Lin who is disgusted by it. Killing is killing when someone is trying to kill you. Doesn't matter if you stab them, beat them with a rock, use magic or resort to a teaspoon. This is even more galling when Cole on two occasions pretty much flat out tries to murder people who are just talking with him and more so as they are giving him information he should be at least listening to and making an informed choice about.

In short this is just one of many moments that are just unlikely or bordering on utter stupidity that I found it hard to enjoy. Also, the narrator didn't work for me. His voicing of the characters was great, but I found his pacing and style for the narrative irritating. It might not bother everyone though, and so I call this a personal issue really.

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Super heroes meet Epic Fantasy

This series is hotting up nicely - couldn't resist.

Awesome powers, strengths - of brawn and will. Friendships and alliances. Villains and betrayals.

I'm looking forward to the next one already.

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  • Kevin Lee
  • 02-01-19

The Dragonball Z meme of fantasy novels

This book consists of short bursts of action and between repetitive tedious descriptions of what each character thinks about the current situation, the state of their muscles, how tired they are, how they feel about how tired they are and on and on. It seems that every five feet the group walks necessitates them to stop and review the last steps and what the goal will be. I endured the first book hoping the pacing would improve since the premise was interesting, but alas it didn't.