Strange story

For an erotic novel (or, short story, really), I didn't find it very erotic. It definitely had sex, but every scene felt abbreviated and rushed with too little description. It's too bad because the story has an interesting and unusual plot which could have made a great story if it were better written. If you're looking for vanilla sex, romance, or even the typical set of positions and activities you see in an average porn movie, you won't find any of that here.

The voice of the narrator fit well with the story and was pleasant to listen to but I only give the performance 3 stars because there was a lot of distracting and inappropriate pauses between lines. I don't know if that's just sloppy editing or maybe they wanted to stretch the story a little to make it appear longer.

The story is just too short to say much more about it without at least hinting at a lot of what happens in it, so if you absolutely don't want any clues about what happens, stop reading now.

This story involves a lot of the less common erotic kinks out there. If you like unbirthing, semen play, transformation, painful sex, or chastity belts, you might like this one, but as I said it moves so quickly through pretty much everything I think it would be hard to get much out of it even if you like any of those subjects.

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