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Succubus Lord 2

By: Eric Vall
Series: Succubus Lord, Book 2
Length: 8 hrs and 29 mins
4.5 out of 5 stars (42 ratings)

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Summary

Redhead succubus joins the harem....

©2018 Eric Vall (P)2019 Eric Vall

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Not finished editing!!!!!

In the first book there is an instance when the car brakes down that the narrator losses character & laughs this added to the moment! Chapter 16 sounds like it’s a first pass you hear the mic clicking on and off and delivery advice being give this is not professional or finished! I cannot recommend before fixed. First 15 chapters seemed fine.

3 of 3 people found this review helpful

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Great story by Eric Vall but serious editing issue

This was soured by dodgy editing from chapter 16 onwards. Completely unprofessional final editing or lack of should I say.

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click click

Who did the editing!?
Why are there clear mistakes that should have been cut in the middle of the audio book!?
the whole dinner scene and after!
It detracts from the rest of the performance!
Now I don't know if I should buy the next on the series!

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So disappointed with the editing after chapter 16

The story carrys on well from the first book but it's all spoiled due to the poor editing after chapter 16. Microphone clicking on and re hashing the words completely destroys the flow of the story.

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  • Kabul
  • 08-06-19

AUDIBLE, FIX THIS ! The editor fell asleep.......

this book had a lot of editing glitches ( bloopers), almost all of them were in chapter 15 and 16.
You have the opportunity to listen to part of the recording process.
When one of actors would flub a line or mispronounce a word, you get to hear it, followed by "TOCK TOCK TOCK " and then the correct line. Two or three times would have been funny ( the first was hilarious and I hope it's left in). Unfortunately it happened so many times , it became annoying.
I think the editor fell asleep on the control panel , while editing the final cut. I could be that they forgot the save the edited segment and uploaded without a quality check.
...the distraction slightly took away from the stroy. It was in no way as bad as the abomination of a production the "Twin born" trilogy was.

I honestly hope both of these books will be fixed.

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  • Anonymous User
  • 16-06-19

Great story, buuut...

There were several times where the readers would slightly backtrack because of mis pronunciation or other reasons. kinda broke immersion of the story

6 of 6 people found this review helpful

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  • Matthew
  • 11-06-19

chapter 16 needs to be redone

the talkers keeped on messing up.
the talkers kept on stumbling.
they kept on having small correction.

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  • NextDayAir
  • 18-06-19

bloopers left in take you out of the mood

while I like the story and the voice acting was decent, in the last three hours of the performance they left all the bloopers in the recording. you hear a click and a repeat of the same line. it gets distracting and takes you right out of the story.

5 of 5 people found this review helpful

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  • FrederickT
  • 17-06-19

Could have been a four star performance

This is a great story with great voice acting (much better than single narrator), but the audio editing left errors and retakes in. Chapter 16 is a mess.

5 of 5 people found this review helpful

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  • Scott
  • 08-08-19

Great book, but too many audible errors.

Great book (not finished yet) but I had to stop to point out how many errors there are on Audibles side. Throught the the book, mainly chapter 15, 16 and 17, the voice actors errors have been left in. them stuttering followed by the start stop clicking completely took me out of the experience.

Love the story though. great characters, plot and Humor. Audible just needs to edit the audio.

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  • Dylon
  • 15-06-19

Great Book

I could not give full stars on the performance since it appears that there may have been some oversight in chapter 16. It sounds like the producers of the audiobook left their notes and stop points and did not clean up but other than that and maybe one other time the audiobook was great.

4 of 4 people found this review helpful

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  • TDMalpha
  • 12-08-19

Great story, but...

The editor fell asleep during chapter 15. Though, it was kinda neat hearing the outtakes? My review would have been 5 star all the way, but all the F-ups in editing really hurt the overall.

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  • Anonymous User
  • 09-08-19

A alright read for those who enjoy harem storys

as other people have already pointed out, chapter 16 is a mess, otherwise descent book

1 of 1 people found this review helpful

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  • EskimoMonkey
  • 09-08-19

Hilarious and thrilling

It has action, humor, wit, clever 4th wall breaking jokes and plenty of fun time scenes
Fantastic voice acting, sometimes the book is so funny even the actors break out in laughter, honestly thank you Eric Vall for leaving that in, made my day

1 of 1 people found this review helpful