The Legacy: The Darkness Within Saga, Book 1

Excellent story, loved it even. Strong world building and lots of grey characters that feel real. Except the main character. He almost ruined it for me. He has the problem that arises, at least to me and that occurs a lot in recently written books by many authors, and it is that he's afraid or remorseful of taking life, inexplicably so. I understand the need to be human and good... But there was a scene, and spoiler's, where he took bullets from some gang members instead of shooting back because he didn't want to see death... that in itself I can understand. But his wife was with him and she nearly died. That I don't. You protect those you care about, not die for a belief that will injure others. Happens again and again through the story. Stupid mistakes he makes that get others hurt.. and all he can complain about is how much this place sucks and how he can't be a good guy. And then he feels bad because others got hurt. What!! The author probably had his reasons... it was too weird for me. Cannot stand cowardly or saintly main characters... the reader has to be off like mind to enjoy it. And that's not me. It was hard for me to connect with him, couldn't really feel sorry for him at all, which was opposite of what was intended. But other than that.. loved the book. Probably will buy book #2.

I have a hard time understanding how an author can put so much effort into creating a story and at the same time ignore English grammar: it was given to him and I; me going; tastes badly. Are there no proof readers anymore? If there are any do they wish to see the language change? The story is very convoluted but enjoyable. I expect the subsequent volumes will be more so now I have a feel for the many threads

I just feel that the people from earth jumped into the acceptance of everything far to fast.

This was a great story, I like everything from start to finish. I can't wait for the next book.

This is an epic story that is well written. The world building is pretty good and the characters are interesting. I will definitely get the next installment.

The narrator gave life to the story and the characters. Simon Vance is always a sure bet.

I'll definitely listen to next book. also I enjoyed being entertained for 20+ hours with one credit:)