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One False Step: A Dark Mafia Erotic Billionaire Stepbrother Romance Story for Women

The Billionaires Mens Club Erotica Stories Series, Book 1
Narrated by: Denise Black
Length: 3 hrs and 27 mins
Categories: Erotica, Fiction
4.5 out of 5 stars (28 ratings)

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Summary

“We both wanted this Leigh,” McKale said, confusion clearly coloring his voice, “why are you shutting me out?”

Leigh Pulson has spent the past three years away from home trying to escape the Coleman name. 

But when McKale Coleman arrives on her doorstep one evening, Leigh knows that her time of freedom is about to be cut short.

Leigh has long since tried to suppress her scandalous attraction to the tall muscular handsome McKale…but the man himself holds no such illusions. 

McKale - the billionaire heir to the Coleman fortune - has been tasked with finding Leigh and bringing her home…whether Leigh wants to or not.

Along the way McKale offers Leigh every temptation, while Leigh tries her hardest not to give into her darkest desires.

Authors Note: This book was previously published under the title My Steps Wants and depicts sensually mature situations.

©2018 Charlotte Union (P)2018 Charlotte Union

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What a ride!

Less mafia and more about wealth and power, One False Step tracks the return of prodigal child Leigh back to her home - and into the arms of her first love, McKale Coleman. Great narration coupled with a hot plot made this a joy to read from start to end.

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Dark Betrayal Romance

What starts out with an intense scene in an apartment stripped bare of all Leigh's possessions soon escalates into emotional dilemmas after dilemma. The connection between McKale and Leigh is gritty and raw and I loved it when neither one held back. I couldn’t get enough!

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Sexy Romance Done Right

Well written with some incredible twists and turns. Sexy Romance Done Right. Highly recommend it.

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Wow!!

I love this book, although fair warning, far from being a romance for the faint of heart this audio book has - what I would deem - some elements of psychological abuse in the way that Leigh falls into line for McKale. Also - spoiler alert - there are a lot of hot scenes in this book so be sure to listen with your headphones on! *blush*

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A Dark Romance that loses its Erotic Steam

An otherwise fascinating first chapter soon descends into a meandering plot that doesn’t seem to go anywhere. I enjoyed the story despite this but the plot does lose a lot of its urgency as it goes on.

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Erotica with a hint of corporate

This book is short and sexy. The two authors do not waste too much time on unnecessary dialog, explanation or events. The scenes almost hop from one sexual encounter to the next with a bit of explanation that leads the audience to the climax of the plot. To be fair the plot is good but very brief, a little to my disappointment. That said, the title does indicate this is erotica and it definitely delivers.

This book was given to me for free at my request and I provided this voluntary review.

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More sexy than story

Thank you to Charlotte Union for giving me a free code in return for an honest review. This was a good story. I would have liked a lot more detail however and a little more focus on the story. It was very sex focused, although it fit in well, I'd have liked a little more story and character development, I wouldn't hesitate to grab another book by these two authors as they obviously have great imaginations that fit very well in the style of stories that I like.

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  • AB
  • 11-04-19

Different Narrator

OMG!! the narrator is terrible. Her male voice is horrible and don't get me started on the sex scenes. The narrator should not narrate erotic romance. I don't think I can listen to another book narrated by Denise Black.

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  • James A. Hick
  • 17-10-19

Great book!

This book was Smutty, Saucy, and Sexy with a lot of graphic parts that are totally worth a credit to listen to! :p

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  • Bobby B. Martin
  • 17-10-19

A story about addictive romance.

One of the best things about dark romance is the way both characters know that what they have is wrong but they can’t help but crave for each other. One False Step has this in spades throughout and it makes this one of the most intriguing books I’ve read this year.

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  • Vera W. Savage
  • 17-10-19

Love

A dark romance layered in tension that has you on your toes from the very beginning. And that first sex scene… phew!

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  • Hassan G. Tejada
  • 17-10-19

Dark romance, yes. Mafia romance? hmm

I won’t reveal too much because this is a story with a lot happening from the moment you start listening. I will say that the main negative of this book for me is that it isn’t really a mafia story.

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  • Denis M. Brown
  • 17-10-19

Erotic Angst

From the very first sentence this book captured me. I loved the terribly twisted way McKale is so casual about putting Leigh’s whole life in upheaval at a moments notice. Yet he does it in a way that makes you want him even more. Very sexy and exciting to listen to.

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  • wendy ballard
  • 15-01-19

not bad

She ran away from her step daddy and step brother since the srep brother refused to run with her and now she had to come back after they went into her apartment and got her things to make her go back

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  • K
  • 11-12-18

Short story romance

This was a great story. Had more depth to it than many short stories, particularly erotica stories. Good story and hot scenes! I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.

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  • Rebecca Azizov
  • 08-12-18

hot

a very hot steamy and outstandingly interesting Book for a book free hours it was so intense and so well-written I enjoyed it enormously mckale is hot as hell!
I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review

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  • Jan M
  • 01-12-18

Not what I expected

I was expecting more Mafia type action in this listen. The authors, Charlotte Union and Theda Sinclair, wrote a decent story that just needed more details in the background and less focus on the sex. To me the sex was overdone, and the base story underdone. The narration by Denise Black fit the book. I requested this review copy audiobook and have voluntarily written this review. To me, erotic romance is not all sex, but how they say it to make it sizzle. This book did not have the "sizzle" but rather lots of sex.