Overall it's pretty dire and repetitive.

If the book was just one story it wouldn't be great, but it wouldn't bore you to tears either. Also, I loathe to say I don't honestly think this was a woman writing this. Feels more like a man writing under a female pen name, but who doesn't want his secret fantasies to be known to all who know him. Could be wrong, but it just feels that way.

The stories aren't what is repetitive, as each place and reason why the man becomes a woman is different and so the build up. What follows the transformation is what kills this as a book. The sex is what is repetitive. Even to the point of repeating phrases, sentence structure and overall word use. Even the sex acts are virtual copies from story to story. Each new girl makes one failed attempt at deep throating before instantly mastering it on the next try for example.

Then there is the fact if this is a new female body shouldn't she be a virgin? Even if we give a pass on the lack of discomfort from straight sex, each girl story to story has exactly the same response to anal sex - highly unlikely.

I got bored after about five stories. Each story starts well enough but the sex lacks imagination totally when moving from story to story. Mix in a narrator that I would consider on the low end of average and I think I did well to manage five stories.

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