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i just couldnt finnish

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2 out of 5 stars
Performance
3 out of 5 stars
Story
2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 07-05-20

info dumps, lazy tropes and poor pace make this a dull and boring book. please dont bother, the main chrt is so conflicted, depressed / emo. he is also just but tyranical fair but harsh. he is a teenager as a main plot point and has all the anoying foibles . to sum up. prince is cast as a savior and has to stalin his way into the comunist tree folk. just a poor story

after 12 books i doubt a few things

Overall
3 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 27-04-20

1. eric vall has never had sex.
2. he has any understanding of bdsm.
3. he used wet love tunnel only 7 times?
4. any man came with the pressure of a fire hydrant. really?

i know hareem novels are a guilty pleasure but please eric consult a woman or two on your sentance structure.

what i am trying to say is. i have enjoyed ish these books. but they are just becoming so wrote and formula driven.

you throw in a perky nipple here, tbrobbing erection there. and a perfectly crisp and moist baked good. wtf.

hats of to the narators though. this must be pure cringe to read.

agressivy purred?
i saw read but kept it (tempur) rained in. oxy moron sentence

what shuger

Overall
3 out of 5 stars
Performance
2 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 21-04-20

i am sorry but the blurb does not desribe this book. it isnt two main characters but 6. he is not grrm. the narrator is dull. and the 30 min plus info dumps at multiple times is just boring. this is a loosley realised post greco magical fantasy bigged up . when it should have been edited and revised down. please only listen to kill time.

poor and simple

Overall
2 out of 5 stars
Performance
3 out of 5 stars
Story
1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 09-03-20

the book is not like his other novels and is more basic. more conveyer belt women and just poor all around

another medium dungeon harem book.

Overall
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 09-03-20

it was hard to listen to. baisic in the extreme. if you are a horny 15 year old u may like this

a bit much

Overall
3 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 24-01-20

its a bit to much this time. i know i know. i went in to this series knowing it was a hareem novel. but this one is less adult esk and more 13 year old drivel.

its set in the same world as the last one and this time makes even less sense. also the author moves to far forward in the harem. 3 to 4 to quickly. just sigh. its not even funny or erotic

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good first story but the narrator

Overall
4 out of 5 stars
Performance
3 out of 5 stars
Story
3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 18-09-19

hey good first story. manga esk style story that is exactly how you think it will be. it doesn't really go into great detail and has the market audience I think of a 15 to 18 year old boy. while it is fun and has a few Pop Culture references it's not the most well written or fleshed out. however give the author his dues it is his first book in the series. I must admit that some of the descriptive scenes are uninspired.


the narrator towards the end of the book breaks down and starts laughing. this needs to be re edited.

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well written and performed.

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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
Story
4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 08-05-19

ot the usual s and f hareem. much higher quality writing. well performed as well. would recomend

not as good

Overall
3 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
Story
2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 31-01-19

this fell short of the last two books. the humour and funy interactions now play second fiddle to world events. no explosive pancake madness and hareem swelling becomes nuch more prevalent. not the same tone as the previous two

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twaddle made by a horny boy

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1 out of 5 stars
Performance
3 out of 5 stars
Story
1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 24-12-18

i think my title really says it all. poor story, poor naration. a dungeon that makes avatars and send them out to hump there way to conquering all. sounds funny. nope it dosent. the pros are so poor. the sex is poor. the combat is poor. the narator i hope was drunk.

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