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alistair samson

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Swing and a miss

Overall
2 out of 5 stars
Performance
1 out of 5 stars
Story
1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 16-06-20

1st book a good start coming of age story
2nd book starts off well, however the central character doesn’t develop and by the end is no more developed then at the beginning.
by the end it’s very easy to hate the central character.
The author tries to make other bit part characters more important to take the lake of Kailen development but fails.
3rd book you just want the main character to die, I think the author wanted that as well.
I think by book 3 the author realises the Pure mechanic is too over powered, that the rest of the book doesn’t work or make sense.
There also fed up of the Kailen character and realises they’ve failed to make the character work. So they rushed out a load of garbage to finish the plot arc, this is very noticeable I would recommend you don’t waste money or a credit on this let alone the 50+ hours listening to it.

Another beta book

Overall
1 out of 5 stars
Performance
3 out of 5 stars
Story
1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 21-10-19

I’m afraid the writer really doesn’t understand how to make a character, the central character is such a beta cuck. By the end of the 1st part you feel embarrassed for the characters and his pathetic nature. Sorry other than the fact it’s really long there’s only so much effort you can put. Into listening to a character that’s happy getting screwed over by his best mates dad, his best mate and ex girlfriend for 30+ hours save your credits hire something shorter but with a better charactet

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