Colette Coffey

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Very wordy narrative

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Reviewed: 30-10-19

Overall the story is good, I have been listening to audio books for a while and with this book, the narrative was very wordy and overly descriptive. It deflected from the story as I found myself fast forwarding to the speech parts to stay on track. Novels that go into so much description fail their audience as it appears you don’t trust the audience to connect dots