The actions of the main characters family members would be what I'd change. They charge off with a plan that just wasn't believable to me, and trustin..Show More »g someone with a story that sounded to good to be true. Not to mention not even considering to ask the MC what she wanted.This got covered by convenient lack of cell service so they couldn't talk to her. They were on the road for hours and I'm sure Texas is not that lousy for cell coverage that they would have zero coverage for the whole trip. They even had rather weak reasons they could not use a landline, and no mention of looking for a payphone on the trip.
Yes, she does have some reasonable books. As for the narrator. This book was narrated by Angela Starling, or was in my version despite what the blurb ..Show More »says. And she was way better than the narrator for the first two who could not read narrative to save her life. Allison reads to fast and monotone for narrative. Heck pretty when she dies is a longer book (in text) than this one but is 2h40m shorter than this one in audio, and all down to over fast reading that left no texture of light and shade to the narrative. This one was better.