Darkness comes as a new power rises in Angrääl. The Dark Knight has betrayed the Gods and stolen The Sword of Truth, trapping them in heaven. With the power of the Sword he can reshape the world and bring death to all who oppose him. Only one thing stands between the darkness and the light. Gewey Stedding. Only he has the power to stand against the oncoming storm. Only he can mend the world. But only if he can discover his power....
©2012 Brian D. Anderson (P)2013 Podium Publishing
this book seems like a 1st draft. how it made it to publishing I have no idea. the characters are cliché which I can understand and can live with, but in terms of their development and consistency it is abysmal. Lee starfinder (the protagonist's mentor) is a douche. How Gewey or any other character haven't punched him in the face yet, I have no idea. for a mentor, he has a worrying case of bipolar. one moment he is praising Gewey for a spur of the moment recklessness, next moment he is berating him (a beginner) for his lack of experience during training. not even women would play you hot and cold to this extent. there is a severe lack in continuity in terms of character personalities.
also, chapter 3 (i think. forgive me if i recall incorrectly) where does one begin? I understand that you want to dedicate an entire chapter to giving Lee a back story by letting Lee give a camp fire story. but the way the author writes it makes it feel as though Lee is reading out his life story from a book rather than orally telling it. It was a tough chapter to overlook.
all in all, it is passable.....barely. the ideas although cliche are fine. but lacks skilful presentation. the book tries to do too many things at once and does not give the appropriate effort required to flesh them out. much more thought required. and definitely hire some better proof readers.
the narrator does his best with the material he has been given, but I can understand if he lost the will to put in anymore effort without actually having to re write the entire book itself.
In short no. The main protagonist was whiny and not really likable. I think it is a combination of the performance and lack of character depth that causes this.
Not at all, I love this genre and will continue to read book from it.
Probably not, I found that the performance was disappointing, Gewey in particular is performed in such a whiny way that it was quite annoying.
Salma'tia and also Lee's confrontation with the Elf.
This story would probably make a great introduction to the genre. For more well read genre buffs you will not find this in any way satisfying. I came to this book having just read (listened to) Elantris by Brandon Sanderson and The Skull Throne by Brent Weeks both of those books are fantastic and this book just couldn't live up to the precedent.
Gewey is too whiny and snivelling for a protagonist, we get that he wants everyone to do the right thing, you don't need to reinforce it with wide-eyed innocence at every possible decision.
The book ends in an odd place, there's not really a cliff hanger as the "big climax" happens quite a bit before the end of the book and then it just tapers off into a nothing side story.
It's predictable at almost every point in the story, surprise! this character who appears kind isn't!
I don't think I will buy the second novel. Which will be the first time I ever let a series of books go unfinished (and I bought book 11 of the Wheel of Time after the disaster that was book 10 !)
24 year Old Brit with a Passion for Fantasy, historical fiction and Sci-fi.. and dragons . I like Dragons. Also Dyslexic so apolagise
Not really, i keep on hoping its a late bloomer but so far im still stuck with the poor spotty oik.
he feels like he has raped Chris P and Tolkien for ideas and with no clue or no decent publishers has vomited his gooey proceeds onto the pages. a poor info dumping mess i would say.
altering your voice for different characters is seen a a good idea.
im curious where will he go. like Geordie shore or keeping up with the Ks u cant look away from the drivel.
Only if your rich or have credits burning a whole in yore account buy this. only for the people with serious time or brain cell to kill
Great book to listen to. Very easy listen story runs at a fast pace
Never a dull moment
The scope is good, there is plenty of story the get involved with. The book is just childish, the twists are barely twists, everyone is really nice to one another, no real character depth.
Been a bit more gritty and no so weak.
I did read that this was aimed at teens but thought I would give it a try anyway, if you're in the same boat I would advise against it. The story has no bite and just plods through, they do this, they meet them, they become friends, no real excitement. The narration on the other hand was very good.
really strong start
this has the potential to grow into something very interesting. I Iike the way that even in the first book parts of the story elements twist together and hope to see it develop in interesting ways. This seeding of plots reminds of the early books in the songs of ice and fire series
I really like Derek Perkins performances, i think that he adds a real something to a story. His performance is great a usual.
Laugh or cry , not really but it did keep me engaged and i will continue with the rest
I probably wouldn't have finished this book if I was reading it myself. I found it very hard to care about the characters and the constant info dumps from characters narrating their own life events seemed dull. also the convenience of objects or characters turning up at the right time with no good reason just stank.... here have my hugely valuable magic sword. why? because you seem like a nice guy and it will be a plot point later in the story. oh come on!
I enjoy the criminal law, reading 19th century literature, and epic and contemporary fantasy too.
A pretty good story really but the narrator lets it down by using the same voice for most of the characters.
"Really happy I found this series"
Easy to get into, has a good pace to it. The characters become well developed and are interesting. I felt invested in their lives. Fun story.
"This is a great series!"
I love this series. It's the story of a very young man who unwittingly becomes a hero and the story tells of his growth and of his heros journey. It's a story of sword and sorcery and love, and the love part is appropriate for all ages and not mushy, or over done. If you like sword and sorcery books with elves and monsters then this is a book you'll probably like as much as I do.
"Good beginning to a Decent Fantasy Series"
Good start to this fantasy series. Not greatly compelling, and sometimes a bit slow, but no real complaints from me. I like the characters and the relationships that are forming, with developing bonds of loyalty and camaraderie. I also like the type of magic the godling uses.
No sex, no cussing. Some bloody violence, but not too dark. Sometimes the author slips up, inserting modern slang phrases, but otherwise, decent writing style. The author writes action scenes better than he does dialogue, in my opinion.
Here is an example of a vivid action scene, from book 6:
"Again the Ajagara charged, its impact this time causing large cracks to form in the pillar. One more assault like that, and Gewey knew it would collapse and his protection would be gone. He looked urgently around for alternative cover, but with the mist still shrouding his surroundings, there was nothing in sight. As the beast backed away for a third assault, Gewey crouched low, his leg muscles tensed and ready to spring..."
Solid gold narration by Derek Perkins.
"Excellent set of books"
The story, the reader, the relationships
He does a fabulous job with the voices of the people.
"hmm gavevit a try. now listening to book three."
not the voice i would have chosen for a story about a boy in his mid to late teens, but after a short while it does grow on you. awesome story great voice
"Pretty good, I will continue to the next book."
Main protagonist a little whiny at first. Got better at the end. I'll be continuing.
"Great Epic Fantacy!"
Wow! Really lost of good action, characters, etc... Typically, I don't like stories with "gods"....
Other books of this "Epic Fantasy" genre I highly recommend are:
The Name of the Wind
Eye of the world
Game of Thrones
The Warded Man
The Way of Kings
I love this book. Very interesting. Derek Perkins is a very talented and excellent narrator.
Loved it can't wait to hear the next one. I hope it keep the same or even more energy.
well written. multi layered storey. could not get through it fast enough. I'm glad i bought the entire series. i highly recommend it
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