Holly Palmer fell in love with the old public house as soon as she saw it.
All of her instincts should have told her of the mistake that she was about to make.
©2015 Neal James (P)2015 Neal James
Very spooky story and quite gripping, had me on the edge of my seat
The final scene, want to know what happened next :)
An atmospheric tale made more so by the sound effects and the narrator's voice. The build up to a chilling ending made this a 'page turner'. An excellent short story.
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