Being confronted on the beach by a sexy stranger wasn't part of Natalie Conner's plans for a peaceful morning taking photos. And why on earth would he think she's taking pictures of him, anyway? Who is he? One thing's for sure, he's hot, and incredibly romantic, feeding Natalie's wounded soul.
Luke Williams just wants the world to give him a break, so seeing yet another camera aimed at his face has him ready to pounce on the beauty behind the lens. When he finds out she has no idea who he is, he's intrigued and more than a little tempted by her. Natalie has a body made for sex, a sassy mouth and Luke can't get enough of her, but he's not ready to tell her who he really his.
Natalie is a no nonsense girl who doesn't do well with lies and secrets. What will happen to this new relationship when she discovers what Luke's hiding?
©2012 Kristen Proby (P)2013 Audible, Inc.
Stay away from this author! The longer I listened the more annoyed I became. Here is the book: Girl meets boy in the first few chapters then 10 hours of nothing... prattling on and on with very dull sex thrown into the mix. Where is the story? Where is the punch line? I can't believe that with so many good books out there this one has been turned into an audiobook.
everything had amazing story and great storyline in each chapter
Loved how romantic it is and Luke is on my novel dream character guy list for sure
love unscripted by Tina Reber
It's also about a female who doesn't get the big deal with fame and she meets the very famous actor Ryan and unlike come away with there's two novels and the books are much more longer and in depth the storyline
she's seems the perfect voice for Natalie forever now I will always see her at the voice of the main character well done
many here's a few without Spoilers
1-Luke asking a very romantic question in the best way to make you Ryan happy tears
2- the moment Natalie found out Luke was famous from her roommate wow I was upset and understanding for Luke and Natalie both
3-the first time they said the words I love you
4- the first time they called each other boyfriend and girlfriend
and there were fun my moments
this book is perfect if you want a romance and th perfect rich ex-actor dreamy guy who treats the girl with a past twist like every girl deserves
I dream about you wide awake in my armsIt’s the last time I sleep alone dreaming of you in my armsI’ll kiss you every day & every night
Audio = GoodNarrator= On Luke's voice a little boring could sound more enthusiastic!Story= I didn't believe this love, had struggled connecting to the characters, they fell in love so quick ... lots of sex scenes on repeat, same words same "thing"... It was all about sex, not that romantic or sweet at all, only at the end of the story...I've listen to better audio books maybe it's the monotone of the narrator on Luke's voice... fell asleep many times ... so dull doesn't do them justice, maybe that's it...In the end I think the book could had better editing and definitely change the energy on Luke's voice...ugh Nevertheless I'm looking forward to next book, curious of Jules's story!
I don't know, maybe the Paperback version, because Audio as I said earlier didn't do them justice, I mean the characters they didn't seem real to me.
Need more work
Come away with me - Norah Jones's song
"recommended for all you erotic romanceaholics!"
Looking for a steamy, no angst, pure swoon-fest?? Come Away with Me by Kristen Proby was a very sweet love story. The first in the With Me in Seattle series. The flow, the writing style, the feel of the story, the characters, everything just instantly hooked me.The perfect blend of sweet, angst-free romance and super hot sex. The story starts off when Natalie first encounters Luke while she is taking pictures one morning on the beach. Luke approaches her and demands that he give him her camera. The thing is, Natalie is unsure why this handsome stranger is enraged with her. Frankly, she thinks she is being mugged. Once the misunderstanding is cleared up, Luke realizes that Natalie has no idea that he is a famous actor (or was one) and she really was taking pictures of the scenery. Needless to say, the man becomes intrigued. So ensues the beginnings of their sweet romance. Luke loves the fact that Natalie is not with him due to his fame and fast becomes smitten with this beautiful sassy woman. Natalie also falls fast and hard for the charming and utterly gorgeous man who has her heart beating faster. This book has no external drama or bad guy. No cheating, major stupidity, long separations or anything will make you threaten bodily harm. Its solely focused on the romance between Luke and Natalie! Their story is incredibly steamy and this is an erotic romance that has a lot of sex scenes. So, what made it 4 stars instead of 5? A few times I wanted to roll my eyes because of how unrealistic some parts were but this is fictional romance so I have no right to complain. I felt their relationship progressed super sonic fast. And lastly, and this might sound weird, but some parts of the story just felt a little ‘too’ perfect at times. Too many endearments, too many 'perfect' scenes. However, this book was still a gem! The characters were fantastic! I feel like the author put a lot of time into writing the perfect details, details that you actually want to know, not boring ones. I'm really looking forward to the other books in the series! If you love steamy romance without excess drama, then definitely add this book. Can't wait to enjoy the next book, Fight With Me!
"3 out of 5 cheesetastic stars, baby"
Narrator Rating: 4.5 out of 5 Jennifer Mack was very good. She added to the story and made it more tolerable. She's high on my favorite narrators list!
Overall Rating: 3 out of 5 cheesetastic stars, baby (It’s not great but not so terrible I couldn't finish it.)
No tension, lots of sex, stupid drama and everyone is beautifully jealous. Enjoy!
If you're looking for a light romance novel with lots (and I do mean lots) of sex with zero buildup of sexual tension, you happen to love beautiful people who whisper sexily, jealous assholes, you don't have an issue with over usage of endearments and forced conflict then this is the book for you. Otherwise don't waste your time or your money!
Maybe I'm cynical from all the rip your heart out and stomp it into the ground books I've been reading lately but this book was super tacky to me. 'Baby' 'honey' 'beautiful' are the main endearments set on auto repeat throughout this book. Then there was the whispering. I absolutely did not like being persistently reminded how much she adored Luke's whispering! Did I mention Luke is beautiful, Natalie has a beautiful body (even though she has horrible body image) and everyone is beautiful, baby! Ugh!
"“I've fallen in love with a beautiful, sexy, sweet, jealous control freak.
― Kristen Proby, Come Away with Me"
Luke was like Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde of jealous assholes. He automatically assumed the worst of every situation! If you are freaking out about your boyfriends reaction to finding out that you met with a single male client in a public place then dump him immediately!! He was too sweet then in your face jealous. It seemed like an issue the author forced to create drama, angst and/or conflict.
"“I want to kiss him for caring enough to be jealous, and smack the shit out of him for being so jealous he’s almost blind with it.”
― Kristen Proby, Come Away with Me"
Natalie's character wasn't terrible but she seemed a little childish to me. Her reaction to the big secret was a little too dramatic and juvenile. She thought Luke's jealous streak was hot and worst of all she thought it meant he cared! This just made Natalie's character weak and stupidly naive to me.
Conflict between the characters all seemed artificial and unnaturally written to create drama. I felt the book would have been a better read without it.
There was a lot of sex! It was on the verge of being too much. Some of the scenes were ridiculous but overall I enjoyed the hotness of the book. The problem was there was no buildup or flirty sexual tension. They met, fell in bed, fell in love, add some stupid drama, more sex and there’s your book!
I plan to read the next book in the series (I'm a glutton for punishment), mostly because I want to know what happens with her best friend, but if it’s the sugary sweet sex fest as this book I will be stopping there.
I listened to the Audible.com audio version. The narrator was very good, would give her 4.5 out of 5 stars.
"Yawn! Is it Over Yet?"
There was very little depth to this story. The falling in love in two days was a bit hard to believe. There are no twists or turns to this book. It is plain old boring! Yes there are sex scenes that get steamy but after the first few you can just tune them out. The characters of Natalie and Luke are just dull. The narration is a bit to young and mousy for my taste. I was expecting more and must say I am disappointed. Sometimes it is good to listen to a book that is just a lighthearted romance but usually the characters are exciting or you just get sucked into the story. There is nothing like that in this book. I am trying to figure out how a series could possibly be made from this book. Save your credit and try something else.
"GET THIS BOOK!"
I'm not sure what took me so long to purchase and listen to this book! I've seen it popping up as an option for the genre I love, time and time again, with great reviews. Shame on me is all I can say. This book hit all my sweet spots--it was super hot and sexy--like E.R.O.T.I.C., but, romantic, funny, and endearing, with characters that I can't wait to find out more about. This story is a great beginning to a new series that I will surely gorge myself on with a marathon listening session.
Initially, I wasn't sure about the narrator---her voice is kind of like really sugary candy but was well suited for Natalie's sweet and sassy manner. Luke and Natalie have a love affair that made me swoon--and I'm so not a swooner--but there I was, swooning while driving in my car, totally loving these two together. Overall, I'd highly recommend this book for those who want to drown themselves in love, romance and total ear melting eroticism. I loved it!
"Uh, where's the Plot?"
First book I've not been able to finish. No plot. WAY too many gag-worthy endearments. Main characters had no depth, no personality. I bought this because it was only $1.99, and it's fair to say that I got ripped off. Don't waste your credit or your 2 bucks. Step away people, STEP AWAY.
"Wow a bit much"
I have read several books here & rarely give a review. I really like Kristen ' work. I have another series of hers & loved it. however I found myself saying, alright already, damn how much sex can a book have. I feel that there could have been more storyline if there was not as much sex. then (spoiler alert) when she finds out she is pregnant, she has the nerve to be shocked. well hell when you do it like bunnies that is kinda what happens.
yes most of the scenes are steamy but others were cheesy as well. that was when I said ok enough already. I think I could have one hell of a drinking game for the many times they had sex.
I am going to get the second book & if it has as much sex in it I will not be getting the others. I feel a good storyline is being suffered cause we are fucking all the time. otherwise good book & if you love sex scenes here you go. on to fight with me.
"Narration could have been better."
To give the narrator a glass of water. Her mouth was so dry I could hear her tongue leave the roof of her mouth. Because of this book I listen to the samples before I buy the books. Life lesson learned. The story was sweet.. Sorry if review was too harsh. I normally don't write reviews.. Just thought people should know.
"I threw my Kindle across the room!"
Fire the producer and make her talk like an adult
The narration caused me to want to find a watchtower and seek out someone to take my agressions out on!!!!!!!
Her voice was fine UNTIL SHE WENT INTO CHARACTER where it went up and grated on me to the point I couldn't get past the 1st date and read the book for myself. I will NOT get the rest of the series because of it. NOt even worth the $1.99 I paid and want my $$$ back
"Published Fan Fiction?"
I feel like I'm listening to a different book to those the other reviewers have listened to. I'm three quarters the way through and all I can think is this is some weird fanfiction offering with the main male character and films he starred in renamed so it can be published as a book. The female lead smells like a 'Marysue' being gorgeous (but with low self esteem), brilliant at photography, rich in her own right without even touching the trust fund set up in her name due to a disturbing trauma in her past. She is perfect, he falls instantly in love with her - I'm beginning to wonder if Kristen Proby is trawling fanfiction sites to kick start her muse.
The performance is fine, but the story is so silly it is distracting me to the point where I'm anticipating the next bit of ridiculousness. Looking the reviews again, it seems that I'm in the minority so far as my opinion goes! Purchased on sale, so I'm not gutted about the amount I spent on this, but I'll certainly be more careful about Kristen Proby's offerings in future!
"Juvenile story line"
Potentially, a different narrator might have made the book more enjoyable. She sounded like she was 15, which was hard to get past. More character development and a more realistic beginning - their relationship moved so fast that it was hard to not roll my eyes at the rest of the book.
The characters relationship moved way to fast to be realistic at all. The female character, Natalie, had no ounce of self-respect or dignity - she was in bed with Luke on day 2 of their relationship. It is nice to like each character first and learn about them before they jump in the sack. Also, the number of sex scenes in a book doesn't make it better, and I feel like this author tried to work in as many sex scenes as possible.
Never. Out of all the audible books I've read, she was probably the worst narrator for this genre of book. She needs to consider reading young adult books, not contemporary or erotic books.
Total disappointment. I chose this book because it was part of a series and I could look forward to the next book. I will not purchase the remaining books in the series now.
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