Fix this and it would have been 5

Books were great, only critique is the volume of repetitive content surrounding the kissing and sex. Doesnt need to be placed into every chapter se as book 3 they just get boring.

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An amazing series of books.

Loved all four books, so emotional really connected with the characters. Looking forward to reading the next book.

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Just beautiful!

I’ve listened to all 4 books back to back and loved every second of it. Fantastic story and brilliant narration. I’m just sad there’s not another book in the series to indulge in.

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Loved it!

I cried my heart out multiple times, sometimes utterly bereft and sometimes with pure elation. Absolutely fantastic plot and characters. I've loved listening to every second of this series!

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Ran out of Ideas

I loved the first three books, and the performance by Britney Presley is spectacular for all the books but I feel like even though the story can continue after the third book, it might i’ve been a better idea to make it a bit longer and finish off the story. As for fourth book really feels like the author lacked ideas I feel like the book is 20% we have a mission and we need to save the world and 80% Jess and Mason are having sex, making sexual innuendos, other people are talking about them having sex and then one that really rubbed me was, spoiler alert when Jess found out that Mason took her to the same hotel, The same room and got the usual food as he did with one of his past lovers after the past lover kissed him at a party, and Jess feeling really upset about but mason won’t leave her the f alone when she tries to get away from him to proces the information and then she is upset about the situation it for all of two minutes calls the woman a whore because she wanted to be with Mason in the past. and then almost instantly forgives him, which is fine but then Mason and Jess have sex yet again because Jess needs to mark her territory and prove she is better than the other women, really?!? It’s kinda pathetic. Honest mistake on Mason’s part maybe but having sex with him right after hurting your feelings to a point where you’re heart feels shattered to prove that you’re better than anyone he’s ever been with, really the woman didn’t know he was with Jess so all she had done “wrong”? Was being with him in the past was is this woman vs woman competition bs!?! personally I would’ve preferred to let Jess be upset for a little while, them having a conversation about it like adults, and if Jess was still upset maybe just hold each other in bed for the night. It kind of made me lose interest in the story and I proceeded to skip chapters to get to the end.

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One track.

The fantasy plot is good. The author did become slightly obsessed with repetitive and boring sex scenes, often taking up whole chapters for no story reason.

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