Eve was pleased at the turnout for the Dominant Wives Society's first hands-on meeting. The six couples, all the females being her friends as well as dominatrixes. All of them had brought their husbands. It was a better turnout than Eve had hoped and expected.
Once everyone had arrived, the males wearing nothing but vinyl shorts and leashes that were held by their wives and the women wearing their black leather mini dresses with corsets to push up their breasts and make their waists look smaller, everyone gathered down in the basement where Eve had chairs set up in her beautiful dungeon. The chairs were dark red velvet for the ladies to sit in and the males were to sit on the floor next to their wife. Eve's husband was obediently at her side on the floor wearing his vinyl shorts and leash.
Eve began to speak, "Thank you everyone for coming tonight. Tonight I am going to teach you how to turn your husbands into cuckold husbands."
The wives were smiling.
©2014 Vince Stead (P)2014 Vince Stead
the narrator stops mid sentence as if she didn't realize that was not the end of the sentience, had the writer & the narrator not been the same person I'd say it's the first time she's seen the text.
nope I will avoid her, as both writer & narrator
anyone who had read it
no idea, never got passed chapter 2
"Candy Kross has several other aliases on here"
Someone who isn't bothered when the reader who is also the author cannot read or keep timing consistently. Anyone who doesn't want the correct emotion or inflection applied at the right time.
I feel tricked because I got a book by her under a different name and while her evil dominatrix/cuckoldress mind has beautiful concepts and creativity in the way she breaks her male characters down, it seems odd to do it under different names. I would love to serve her in real life but I can't take her narration. Its an erotic book but riddled with so many stumbles that destroy the moment.
I hate to say this but maybe some day I can make it up to her but when it's your hand that writes it, there should not be any trouble with your lips reading it
disappointed and annoyed.
Kat Black and Candy Kross (same person) are best recieved in person.
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